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Эх сурвалжийг харах

Grammar fixes.

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Simon Perreault 24 жил өмнө
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chapter03/introduction.xml

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 <title>Introduction</title>
 
 <para>
-In this chapter the partition that is going to host the LFS system is
+In this chapter, the partition that is going to host the LFS system is
 going to be prepared. A new partition will be created, a file
-system will be created on it and the directory structure will be
+system will be created on it, and the directory structure will be
 created. When this is done, we can move on to the next chapter and start
 building a new Linux system from scratch.
 </para>

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chapter03/mounting.xml

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 <para>
 Now that we have created a file system, it is ready for use. All we have
 to do to be able to access it (as in reading data from and writing data to 
-it) is mounting it. If it is mounted under /mnt/lfs, this partition can 
-be accessed by going to the /mnt/lfs directory and then doing whatever 
+it) is mount it. If it is mounted under /mnt/lfs, this partition can 
+be accessed by going to the /mnt/lfs directory and then doing whatever
 needed to do. This book will assume that the partition was mounted 
 under /mnt/lfs. It doesn't matter which directory is chosen, the 
 user just has to make sure that he remembers what he chose.

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chapter05/bash-exp.xml

@@ -44,11 +44,11 @@ possible) as the original Bourne shell.
 
 <para>
 The <userinput>&amp;&amp;</userinput>'s at the end of every line cause 
-the next command only to be executed when the previous command exists 
+the next command to be executed only if the previous command exists 
 with a return value of 0 indicating success. In case all of these 
 commands are copy&amp;pasted 
-on the shell is is important to be ensured that if 
-./configure fails, make isn't being executed and likewise if make fails 
+on the shell, is is important to be ensured that if 
+./configure fails, make isn't being executed and, likewise, if make fails, 
 that make install isn't being executed, and so forth.
 </para>