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Simon Perreault 24 years ago
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      chapter03/introduction.xml
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chapter03/introduction.xml

@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 <title>Introduction</title>
 <title>Introduction</title>
 
 
 <para>
 <para>
-In this chapter the partition that is going to host the LFS system is
+In this chapter, the partition that is going to host the LFS system is
 going to be prepared. A new partition will be created, a file
 going to be prepared. A new partition will be created, a file
-system will be created on it and the directory structure will be
+system will be created on it, and the directory structure will be
 created. When this is done, we can move on to the next chapter and start
 created. When this is done, we can move on to the next chapter and start
 building a new Linux system from scratch.
 building a new Linux system from scratch.
 </para>
 </para>

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chapter03/mounting.xml

@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@
 <para>
 <para>
 Now that we have created a file system, it is ready for use. All we have
 Now that we have created a file system, it is ready for use. All we have
 to do to be able to access it (as in reading data from and writing data to 
 to do to be able to access it (as in reading data from and writing data to 
-it) is mounting it. If it is mounted under /mnt/lfs, this partition can 
-be accessed by going to the /mnt/lfs directory and then doing whatever 
+it) is mount it. If it is mounted under /mnt/lfs, this partition can 
+be accessed by going to the /mnt/lfs directory and then doing whatever
 needed to do. This book will assume that the partition was mounted 
 needed to do. This book will assume that the partition was mounted 
 under /mnt/lfs. It doesn't matter which directory is chosen, the 
 under /mnt/lfs. It doesn't matter which directory is chosen, the 
 user just has to make sure that he remembers what he chose.
 user just has to make sure that he remembers what he chose.

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chapter05/bash-exp.xml

@@ -44,11 +44,11 @@ possible) as the original Bourne shell.
 
 
 <para>
 <para>
 The <userinput>&amp;&amp;</userinput>'s at the end of every line cause 
 The <userinput>&amp;&amp;</userinput>'s at the end of every line cause 
-the next command only to be executed when the previous command exists 
+the next command to be executed only if the previous command exists 
 with a return value of 0 indicating success. In case all of these 
 with a return value of 0 indicating success. In case all of these 
 commands are copy&amp;pasted 
 commands are copy&amp;pasted 
-on the shell is is important to be ensured that if 
-./configure fails, make isn't being executed and likewise if make fails 
+on the shell, is is important to be ensured that if 
+./configure fails, make isn't being executed and, likewise, if make fails, 
 that make install isn't being executed, and so forth.
 that make install isn't being executed, and so forth.
 </para>
 </para>