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appendixa/glibc-desc.xml

@@ -24,8 +24,8 @@ file. When a program uses a dynamic library, that executable will not
 contain the code from the C library, but  instead a routine that loads
 the functions from the library at the time the program is run. This
 means a significant decrease in the file size of a program. The 
-documentation that comes with the C Library describes this a little deeper,
-as it is too complicated to explain here in one or two lines.
+documentation that comes with the C Library describes this in more
+detail, as it is too complicated to explain here in one or two lines.
 </para>
 
 </sect2>

chapter06/chroot.xml

@@ -30,17 +30,17 @@ like vim and less to operate properly.
 
 <para>
 Now that we are inside a chroot'ed environment, we can continue to
-install all the basic system software. A user has to make sure all the
+install all the basic system software. You have to make sure all the
 following commands in this and following chapters are run from within the 
-chroot'ed environment. If he ever leaves this environment for a reason
-(say when rebooting or something) he has to remember to mount $LFS/proc again 
-like he did earlier and to re-enter chroot before continuing with the
+chroot'ed environment. If you ever leaves this environment for a reason
+(say when rebooting or something) please remember to mount $LFS/proc 
+again like you just did and re-enter chroot before continuing with the
 book.
 </para>
 
 <para>
 Note that the bash prompt will contain "I have no name!". This is
-normal; Glibc hasn't been installed yet.
+normal because Glibc hasn't been installed yet.
 </para>
 
 </sect1>

chapter06/glibc-exp.xml

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ have Glibc default to using /lib and /usr/lib which is fine right now).
 </para>
 
 <para>
-<userinput>--enable-add-ons:</userinput> This enabled the add-ons that
+<userinput>--enable-add-ons:</userinput> This enables the add-on that
 we install with Glibc: linuxthreads
 </para>
 

chapter06/glibc-inst.xml

@@ -40,9 +40,9 @@ Install Glibc by running the following commands:
 </literallayout></blockquote>
 
 <para>
-A user can get rid of the "I have no name!" in the bash prompt if he wants.
-This is done by exiting chroot and re-entering it. Run the following
-commands to do that:
+You can get rid of the "I have no name!" in the bash prompt if you want
+to by exiting chroot and re-entering it. Run the following commands to do 
+that:
 </para>
 
 <blockquote><literallayout>