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Fix a few typos in chapter 1

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@7647 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
Matthew Burgess 19 年之前
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      chapter01/how.xml
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      chapter01/whatsnew.xml

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chapter01/how.xml

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
   during the distribution installation to be able to access these
   tools.</para>
 
-  <para>As an alternative to installing an entire separate distribution
+  <para>As an alternative to installing a separate distribution
   onto your machine, you may wish to use the Linux From Scratch LiveCD.
   The CD works well as a host system, providing all the tools you need
   to successfully follow the instructions in this book. Additionally,
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
   linkend="chapter-getting-materials"/> explains which packages and
   patches need to be downloaded to build an LFS system and how to store
   them on the new file system. <xref linkend="chapter-final-preps"/>
-  discusses the setup for an appropriate working environment. Please read
+  discusses the setup of an appropriate working environment. Please read
   <xref linkend="chapter-final-preps"/> carefully as it explains several
   important issues the reader should be aware of before beginning to
   work through <xref linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/> and beyond.</para>
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
 
   <para><xref linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/> also shows the user how to
   build a first pass of the toolchain, including Binutils and GCC (first pass
-  basically means these two core packages will be re-installed a second time).
+  basically means these two core packages will be reinstalled).
   The next step is to build Glibc, the C library. Glibc will be compiled by
   the toolchain programs built in the first pass. Then, a second pass of the
   toolchain will be built. This time, the toolchain will be dynamically linked

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chapter01/whatsnew.xml

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 <sect1 id="ch-intro-whatsnew">
   <?dbhtml filename="whatsnew.html"?>
 
-  <title>What's new since the last release.</title>
+  <title>What's new since the last release</title>
 
   <para>Below is a list of package updates made since the previous
   release of the book.</para>