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Fix a few typos in chapter 1

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@7647 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
Matthew Burgess 19 年之前
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chapter01/how.xml

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
   during the distribution installation to be able to access these
   during the distribution installation to be able to access these
   tools.</para>
   tools.</para>
 
 
-  <para>As an alternative to installing an entire separate distribution
+  <para>As an alternative to installing a separate distribution
   onto your machine, you may wish to use the Linux From Scratch LiveCD.
   onto your machine, you may wish to use the Linux From Scratch LiveCD.
   The CD works well as a host system, providing all the tools you need
   The CD works well as a host system, providing all the tools you need
   to successfully follow the instructions in this book. Additionally,
   to successfully follow the instructions in this book. Additionally,
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
   linkend="chapter-getting-materials"/> explains which packages and
   linkend="chapter-getting-materials"/> explains which packages and
   patches need to be downloaded to build an LFS system and how to store
   patches need to be downloaded to build an LFS system and how to store
   them on the new file system. <xref linkend="chapter-final-preps"/>
   them on the new file system. <xref linkend="chapter-final-preps"/>
-  discusses the setup for an appropriate working environment. Please read
+  discusses the setup of an appropriate working environment. Please read
   <xref linkend="chapter-final-preps"/> carefully as it explains several
   <xref linkend="chapter-final-preps"/> carefully as it explains several
   important issues the reader should be aware of before beginning to
   important issues the reader should be aware of before beginning to
   work through <xref linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/> and beyond.</para>
   work through <xref linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/> and beyond.</para>
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
 
 
   <para><xref linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/> also shows the user how to
   <para><xref linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/> also shows the user how to
   build a first pass of the toolchain, including Binutils and GCC (first pass
   build a first pass of the toolchain, including Binutils and GCC (first pass
-  basically means these two core packages will be re-installed a second time).
+  basically means these two core packages will be reinstalled).
   The next step is to build Glibc, the C library. Glibc will be compiled by
   The next step is to build Glibc, the C library. Glibc will be compiled by
   the toolchain programs built in the first pass. Then, a second pass of the
   the toolchain programs built in the first pass. Then, a second pass of the
   toolchain will be built. This time, the toolchain will be dynamically linked
   toolchain will be built. This time, the toolchain will be dynamically linked

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chapter01/whatsnew.xml

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 <sect1 id="ch-intro-whatsnew">
 <sect1 id="ch-intro-whatsnew">
   <?dbhtml filename="whatsnew.html"?>
   <?dbhtml filename="whatsnew.html"?>
 
 
-  <title>What's new since the last release.</title>
+  <title>What's new since the last release</title>
 
 
   <para>Below is a list of package updates made since the previous
   <para>Below is a list of package updates made since the previous
   release of the book.</para>
   release of the book.</para>