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git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2773 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
Jeremy Utley 22 years ago
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chapter04/chapter04.xml

@@ -19,6 +19,14 @@ Often there is a reason for not using the latest version.</para>
 pages will give you easy access to the official download sites as well as
 project websites, mailinglists, FAQs, Changelogs and more.</para>
 
+<para>We can't guarantee that these download locations are always available
+to you. In case a download location has changed since this book was
+published, please try to google for the package. Should you remain
+unsuccessful with this you should consult the book's errata page at
+<ulink url="http://linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/print"/> or try
+the alternative means of download listed at 
+<ulink url="http://linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/packages.html"/></para>
+
 <!--
 <para>For your convenience the top of the list contains a link to a file
 you can use with the <ulink url="http://wget.sunsite.dk">wget</ulink>

+ 1 - 1
chapter05/glibc-inst.xml

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ them when building Glibc.</para>
 is putting the stability of your system at risk.</para>
 
 <para>Though it is a harmless message, the install stage of Glibc will
-complain about the absence of <filename>/etc/ld.so.conf</filename>.
+complain about the absence of <filename>/tools/etc/ld.so.conf</filename>.
 Fix this annoying little error with:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>mkdir /tools/etc

+ 1 - 1
chapter06/adjustingtoolchain.xml

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ retained the source and build directories from the second pass over Binutils.
 Install the adjusted linker scripts by running the following from within the
 <filename class="directory">binutils-build</filename> directory:</para>
 
-<para><screen><userinput>make -C ld INSTALL=/tools/bin/install install-data-local</userinput></screen></para>
+<para><screen><userinput>make -C ld install-data-local</userinput></screen></para>
 
 <para>The linker scripts now contain
 no mention of <filename class="directory">/tools/lib</filename> anymore.

+ 1 - 1
chapter06/changingowner.xml

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ user <emphasis>root</emphasis> by running the following command:</para>
 <para><screen><userinput>chown -R 0:0 /tools</userinput></screen></para>
 
 <para>The command uses "0:0" instead of "root:root", because chown is unable
-to resolve the name "root" until glibc has been installed.</para>
+to resolve the name "root" until the password file has been created.</para>
 
 </sect1>
 

+ 2 - 1
chapter06/chroot.xml

@@ -39,7 +39,8 @@ you must remember to again enter chroot and mount proc (discussed later)
 before continuing with the installations.</para>
 
 <para>Note that the bash prompt will say "I have no name!" This is
-normal, as the Glibc package hasn't been installed yet.</para>
+normal, as the <filename>/etc/passwd</filename> file has not been
+created yet.</para>
 
 </sect1>
 

+ 4 - 7
chapter06/revisedchroot.xml

@@ -3,16 +3,13 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="revisedchroot.html" dir="chapter06"?>
 
 <para>From now on when you exit the chroot environment and wish to re-enter
-it, you need to run the following modified chroot command. The one at the
-beginning of this chapter might not work anymore (if your host distribution
-was based on Glibc-2.2.x or older, the programs in <filename
-class="directory">/tools/bin</filename>, such as <filename>bash</filename>,
-will not work anymore). The following chroot command will work regardless
-of your host distribution's Glibc version.</para>
+it, you should run the following modified chroot command.</para>
 
 <para>Additionally, now that all software has been installed there is no
 need to use anything from the <filename
-class="directory">/tools</filename> directory anymore.</para>
+class="directory">/tools</filename> directory anymore, so it may be deleted.
+However, since the TCL, Expect, and DejaGNU packages only exist here, you
+may want to reinstall them after removing the /tools directory.</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>chroot $LFS /usr/bin/env -i \
 &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;HOME=/root TERM=$TERM PS1='\u:\w\$ ' \