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chapter04/chapter04.xml

@@ -19,6 +19,14 @@ Often there is a reason for not using the latest version.</para>
 pages will give you easy access to the official download sites as well as
 pages will give you easy access to the official download sites as well as
 project websites, mailinglists, FAQs, Changelogs and more.</para>
 project websites, mailinglists, FAQs, Changelogs and more.</para>
 
 
+<para>We can't guarantee that these download locations are always available
+to you. In case a download location has changed since this book was
+published, please try to google for the package. Should you remain
+unsuccessful with this you should consult the book's errata page at
+<ulink url="http://linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/print"/> or try
+the alternative means of download listed at 
+<ulink url="http://linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/packages.html"/></para>
+
 <!--
 <!--
 <para>For your convenience the top of the list contains a link to a file
 <para>For your convenience the top of the list contains a link to a file
 you can use with the <ulink url="http://wget.sunsite.dk">wget</ulink>
 you can use with the <ulink url="http://wget.sunsite.dk">wget</ulink>

+ 1 - 1
chapter05/glibc-inst.xml

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ them when building Glibc.</para>
 is putting the stability of your system at risk.</para>
 is putting the stability of your system at risk.</para>
 
 
 <para>Though it is a harmless message, the install stage of Glibc will
 <para>Though it is a harmless message, the install stage of Glibc will
-complain about the absence of <filename>/etc/ld.so.conf</filename>.
+complain about the absence of <filename>/tools/etc/ld.so.conf</filename>.
 Fix this annoying little error with:</para>
 Fix this annoying little error with:</para>
 
 
 <para><screen><userinput>mkdir /tools/etc
 <para><screen><userinput>mkdir /tools/etc

+ 1 - 1
chapter06/adjustingtoolchain.xml

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ retained the source and build directories from the second pass over Binutils.
 Install the adjusted linker scripts by running the following from within the
 Install the adjusted linker scripts by running the following from within the
 <filename class="directory">binutils-build</filename> directory:</para>
 <filename class="directory">binutils-build</filename> directory:</para>
 
 
-<para><screen><userinput>make -C ld INSTALL=/tools/bin/install install-data-local</userinput></screen></para>
+<para><screen><userinput>make -C ld install-data-local</userinput></screen></para>
 
 
 <para>The linker scripts now contain
 <para>The linker scripts now contain
 no mention of <filename class="directory">/tools/lib</filename> anymore.
 no mention of <filename class="directory">/tools/lib</filename> anymore.

+ 1 - 1
chapter06/changingowner.xml

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ user <emphasis>root</emphasis> by running the following command:</para>
 <para><screen><userinput>chown -R 0:0 /tools</userinput></screen></para>
 <para><screen><userinput>chown -R 0:0 /tools</userinput></screen></para>
 
 
 <para>The command uses "0:0" instead of "root:root", because chown is unable
 <para>The command uses "0:0" instead of "root:root", because chown is unable
-to resolve the name "root" until glibc has been installed.</para>
+to resolve the name "root" until the password file has been created.</para>
 
 
 </sect1>
 </sect1>
 
 

+ 2 - 1
chapter06/chroot.xml

@@ -39,7 +39,8 @@ you must remember to again enter chroot and mount proc (discussed later)
 before continuing with the installations.</para>
 before continuing with the installations.</para>
 
 
 <para>Note that the bash prompt will say "I have no name!" This is
 <para>Note that the bash prompt will say "I have no name!" This is
-normal, as the Glibc package hasn't been installed yet.</para>
+normal, as the <filename>/etc/passwd</filename> file has not been
+created yet.</para>
 
 
 </sect1>
 </sect1>
 
 

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chapter06/revisedchroot.xml

@@ -3,16 +3,13 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="revisedchroot.html" dir="chapter06"?>
 <?dbhtml filename="revisedchroot.html" dir="chapter06"?>
 
 
 <para>From now on when you exit the chroot environment and wish to re-enter
 <para>From now on when you exit the chroot environment and wish to re-enter
-it, you need to run the following modified chroot command. The one at the
-beginning of this chapter might not work anymore (if your host distribution
-was based on Glibc-2.2.x or older, the programs in <filename
-class="directory">/tools/bin</filename>, such as <filename>bash</filename>,
-will not work anymore). The following chroot command will work regardless
-of your host distribution's Glibc version.</para>
+it, you should run the following modified chroot command.</para>
 
 
 <para>Additionally, now that all software has been installed there is no
 <para>Additionally, now that all software has been installed there is no
 need to use anything from the <filename
 need to use anything from the <filename
-class="directory">/tools</filename> directory anymore.</para>
+class="directory">/tools</filename> directory anymore, so it may be deleted.
+However, since the TCL, Expect, and DejaGNU packages only exist here, you
+may want to reinstall them after removing the /tools directory.</para>
 
 
 <para><screen><userinput>chroot $LFS /usr/bin/env -i \
 <para><screen><userinput>chroot $LFS /usr/bin/env -i \
 &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;HOME=/root TERM=$TERM PS1='\u:\w\$ ' \
 &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;HOME=/root TERM=$TERM PS1='\u:\w\$ ' \