Miscellaneous fixes from list.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@3116 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -39,7 +39,8 @@
 environment: Reworked the Bash startup files to enforce a clean environment.
 Closes Bug 714.</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>November 17th, 2003 [jeremy]: Upgraded Man-Pages to 1.63</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>November 17th, 2003 [jeremy]: Upgraded Man-pages to
+1.63.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>November 16th, 2003 [greg]: Chapter 6 - Sysvinit: Simplified
 the sed to demonstrate yet another sed variation.</para></listitem>
@@ -79,7 +80,7 @@ streamlined build commands for Perl's Chapter 5 static
 extensions. Closes Bug 690.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>November 13th, 2003 [gerard]: Upgraded to
-lfs-utils-0.4 and man-pages-1.62</para></listitem>
+Lfs-Utils-0.4 and Man-pages-1.62</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>November 13th, 2003 [gerard]: Renamed GCC
 no_fixincludes-2.patch to no_fixincludes-1.patch which was the name it is

chapter06/perl.xml

@@ -23,11 +23,12 @@ instead and modify the way Perl is built. If you think you can live with the
 (sensible) defaults Perl auto-detects, then just use the command listed
 above.</para>
 
-<para>The meaning of the configure directive:</para>
+<para>The meaning of the configure option:</para>
 
 <itemizedlist>
 <listitem><para><userinput>-Dpager="/bin/less -isR"</userinput>: This corrects
-an error in the perldoc code with the invocation of the less program</para></listitem>
+an error in the perldoc code with the invocation of the less
+program.</para></listitem>
 </itemizedlist>
 
 <para>Compile the package:</para>

chapter06/zlib.xml

@@ -23,10 +23,11 @@ advantage of, should be taken care of by applying this patch:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr --shared</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Note: Zlib is known to build its shared library incorrectly if a CFLAGS
-is specified in the environment. If you are using your own CFLAGS variables,
-ensure you add the <emphasis role="strong">-fPIC</emphasis> directive during
-this stage, and remove it afterwards.</para>
+<note><para>Zlib is known to build its shared library incorrectly if CFLAGS is
+specified in the environment. If you are using your own CFLAGS variable, be
+sure to add the <emphasis role="strong">-fPIC</emphasis> directive to your
+CFLAGS for the duration of the above command, then remove it
+afterwards.</para></note>
 
 <para>Compile the package:</para>