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Typos and minor text changes

This was r11388.
Bruce Dubbs 7 years ago
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4 changed files with 5 additions and 10 deletions
  1. 1 1
      chapter06/systemd.xml
  2. 0 5
      prologue/foreword.xml
  3. 3 3
      prologue/standards.xml
  4. 1 1
      prologue/why.xml

+ 1 - 1
chapter06/systemd.xml

@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@
 
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i '527,565 d'                  src/basic/missing.h
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i '527,565 d'                  src/basic/missing.h
 sed -i '24 d'                       src/core/load-fragment.c
 sed -i '24 d'                       src/core/load-fragment.c
-sed -i '53 a#include &lt;sys/mount.h&gt;' src/shared/bus-unit-util.cd</userinput></screen>
+sed -i '53 a#include &lt;sys/mount.h&gt;' src/shared/bus-unit-util.c</userinput></screen>
 
 
     <para>从默认的 udev 规则中删除不必要的组
     <para>从默认的 udev 规则中删除不必要的组
     <systemitem class="groupname">render</systemitem>:</para>
     <systemitem class="groupname">render</systemitem>:</para>

+ 0 - 5
prologue/foreword.xml

@@ -10,11 +10,6 @@
 
 
   <title>前言</title>
   <title>前言</title>
 
 
-<!--para>My journey to learn and better understand Linux began over a decade ago,
-back in 1998. I had just installed my first Linux distribution and had
-quickly become intrigued with the whole concept and philosophy behind
-Linux.</para-->
-
 <para>从 1998 年起,我开始了长达十余年的学习和深入理解 Linux 的旅程。
 <para>从 1998 年起,我开始了长达十余年的学习和深入理解 Linux 的旅程。
 	当时我刚刚安装了我的第一个 Linux 发行版,
 	当时我刚刚安装了我的第一个 Linux 发行版,
 	并迅速被 Linux 背后的整个设计理念和哲学所折服。
 	并迅速被 Linux 背后的整个设计理念和哲学所折服。

+ 3 - 3
prologue/standards.xml

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
       </listitem>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para><ulink url="http://refspecs.linuxfoundation.org/lsb.shtml">Linux
         <para><ulink url="http://refspecs.linuxfoundation.org/lsb.shtml">Linux
-        Standard Base (LSB) Version 5.0</ulink></para>
+        Standard Base (LSB) Version 5.0 (2015)</ulink></para>
 
 
         <!--para>The LSB has four separate standards: Core, Desktop,
         <!--para>The LSB has four separate standards: Core, Desktop,
         Runtime Languages, and Imaging. In addition to generic requirements
         Runtime Languages, and Imaging. In addition to generic requirements
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@
         <listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>Alsa, ATK, Cairo, Desktop-file-utils, Freetype, Fontconfig,
           <para>Alsa, ATK, Cairo, Desktop-file-utils, Freetype, Fontconfig,
           Gdk-pixbuf, Glib2, GTK+2, Icon-naming-utils, Libjpeg-turbo, Libpng, Libtiff,
           Gdk-pixbuf, Glib2, GTK+2, Icon-naming-utils, Libjpeg-turbo, Libpng, Libtiff,
-          Libxml2, MesaLib, Pango, Qt4, Xdg-utils, Xorg</para>
+          Libxml2, MesaLib, Pango, Xdg-utils, Xorg</para>
         </listitem>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
       </varlistentry>
 
 
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@
       <varlistentry>
       <varlistentry>
         <term><emphasis>LSB Desktop:</emphasis></term>
         <term><emphasis>LSB Desktop:</emphasis></term>
         <listitem>
         <listitem>
-          <para></para>
+          <para>Qt4(但提供了 Qt5)</para>
         </listitem>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
       </varlistentry>
 
 

+ 1 - 1
prologue/why.xml

@@ -659,7 +659,7 @@
       <listitem revision="systemd">
       <listitem revision="systemd">
         <para>Systemd</para>
         <para>Systemd</para>
 
 
-        <!--para>This package provides and <application>init</application> program
+        <!--para>This package provides an <application>init</application> program
         and several additional boot and system control capabilities as an
         and several additional boot and system control capabilities as an
         alternative to Sysvinit.  It is used by many commercial distributions.
         alternative to Sysvinit.  It is used by many commercial distributions.
         </para-->
         </para-->