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Grammatic changes to chapter 6.

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Timothy Bauscher 22 years ago
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chapter06/creatingdirs.xml

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ directory of root, and another to the directories for temporary files.</para>
 <para><screen><userinput>chmod 0750 /root &amp;&amp;
 <para><screen><userinput>chmod 0750 /root &amp;&amp;
 chmod 1777 /tmp /var/tmp</userinput></screen></para>
 chmod 1777 /tmp /var/tmp</userinput></screen></para>
 
 
-<para>The first mode change ensures that not just everybody can enter the
+<para>The first mode change ensures that not just anybody can enter the
 <filename class="directory">/root</filename> directory -- the same
 <filename class="directory">/root</filename> directory -- the same
 as a normal user would do with his or her home directory.
 as a normal user would do with his or her home directory.
 The second mode change makes sure that any user can write to the
 The second mode change makes sure that any user can write to the
@@ -39,11 +39,6 @@ The second mode change makes sure that any user can write to the
 cannot remove other users' files from them. The latter is prohibited
 cannot remove other users' files from them. The latter is prohibited
 by the so-called "sticky bit" -- the highest bit in the 1777 bit mask.</para>
 by the so-called "sticky bit" -- the highest bit in the 1777 bit mask.</para>
 
 
-<para>Now that the directories are created, move the source tarballs that
-were downloaded in Chapter 3 to some subdirectory under
-<filename class="directory">/usr/src</filename> (you
-will have to create the desired subdirectory yourself).</para>
-
 <sect2>
 <sect2>
 <title>FHS compliance note</title>
 <title>FHS compliance note</title>
 
 

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chapter06/flex-inst.xml

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
 
 
 <para><screen><userinput>make install</userinput></screen></para>
 <para><screen><userinput>make install</userinput></screen></para>
 
 
-<para>There are which packages expect to find the flex library
+<para>There are packages which expect to find the flex library
 in the <filename>/usr/lib</filename> directory. Create a symlink
 in the <filename>/usr/lib</filename> directory. Create a symlink
 to account for this:</para>
 to account for this:</para>
 
 

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chapter06/gcc-inst.xml

@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ is implemented.</para></listitem>
 <para><screen><userinput>make bootstrap</userinput></screen></para>
 <para><screen><userinput>make bootstrap</userinput></screen></para>
 
 
 <para>The <emphasis>bootstrap</emphasis> target doesn't just compile GCC, but
 <para>The <emphasis>bootstrap</emphasis> target doesn't just compile GCC, but
-it compiles GCC a multiple times. It uses the first compiled programs to
+it compiles GCC multiple times. It uses the first compiled programs to
 compile itself a second and third time to make sure the compiler was compiled
 compile itself a second and third time to make sure the compiler was compiled
 properly.</para>
 properly.</para>
 
 

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chapter06/zlib-inst.xml

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ shared and static libraries:</para>
 <filename>/lib</filename> directory. That way, in the event
 <filename>/lib</filename> directory. That way, in the event
 that you must boot without the <filename>/usr</filename>
 that you must boot without the <filename>/usr</filename>
 directory, vital system programs will still have access to
 directory, vital system programs will still have access to
-the library. Finish installing shared library:</para>
+the library. Finish installing the shared library:</para>
 
 
 <para><screen><userinput>mv /usr/lib/libz.so.* /lib</userinput></screen></para>
 <para><screen><userinput>mv /usr/lib/libz.so.* /lib</userinput></screen></para>