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Grammatic changes to chapter 5.

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appendixa/bash-desc.xml

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 <sect4><title>bash</title>
 <para>bash is the Bourne-Again SHell, which is a widely used command
 interpreter on Unix systems. The bash program reads from standard
-input, the keyboard. A user types something and the program will evaluate
+input (the keyboard). A user types something and the program will evaluate
 what he has typed and do something with it, like running a
 program.</para></sect4>
 

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appendixa/bash-shortdesc.xml

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 <para>bash is the Bourne-Again SHell, which is a widely used command
 interpreter on Unix systems. The bash program reads from standard
-input, the keyboard. A user types something and the program will evaluate
+input (the keyboard). A user types something and the program will evaluate
 what he has typed and do something with it, like running a
 program.</para>
 

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chapter05/bash-inst.xml

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ package (so in truth we link against the ncurses library).</para>
 
 <para>It is not strictly necessary for the static bash to be linked
 against libncurses (it can link against a static termcap for the time
-being just fine because we will reinstall Bash in Chapter 6 anyways,
+being just fine because we will reinstall Bash in Chapter 6 anyway,
 where we will use libncurses), but it's a good test to make sure that
 the Ncurses package has been installed properly. If not, you will get in
 trouble later on in this chapter when you install the Texinfo package.

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chapter05/setting-environment.xml

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ export LFS LC_ALL CC
 EOF
 source ~/.bash_profile</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>This profile sets the umask to 022, so newly created files will and
+<para>This profile sets the umask to 022, so newly created files and
 directories will have the correct permissions. To be more specific, only
 the file owner will have write permission to new files and directories.
 Other users of the system will be have read permission, and executable

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index.xml

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 <!ENTITY book SYSTEM "book/book.xml">
 
-<!ENTITY version "20030117">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "January 17th, 2003">
+<!ENTITY version "20030118">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "January 18th, 2003">
 
 <!ENTITY ftp-root "ftp://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org">
 <!ENTITY http-root "http://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org">