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Grammar fixes.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@324 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
Simon Perreault 24 years ago
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chapter01/how.xml

@@ -3,17 +3,17 @@
 
 
 <para>
 <para>
 We are going to build the LFS system by using an already installed Linux
 We are going to build the LFS system by using an already installed Linux
-distribution such as Debian, SuSe, Slackware, Mandrake, RedHat, etc. You
+distribution such as Debian, SuSE, Slackware, Mandrake, RedHat, etc. You
 don't need to have any kind of bootdisk. We will use an existing Linux
 don't need to have any kind of bootdisk. We will use an existing Linux
-system as the base (since we need a compiler, linker, text editor and other
-tools).
+system as the base (since we need a compiler, linker, text editor, and
+other tools).
 </para>
 </para>
 
 
 <para>
 <para>
 If you don't have Linux installed yet, you won't be able to put this
 If you don't have Linux installed yet, you won't be able to put this
 book to use right away. I suggest you first install a Linux
 book to use right away. I suggest you first install a Linux
 distribution. It really doesn't matter which one you install. It also 
 distribution. It really doesn't matter which one you install. It also 
-doesn't need to be the latest version, though it shouldn't be a too old one. 
+doesn't need to be the latest version, though it shouldn't be too old. 
 If it is about a year old or newer it should do just fine. You will save 
 If it is about a year old or newer it should do just fine. You will save 
 yourself a lot of trouble if your normal system uses glibc-2.1 or newer. 
 yourself a lot of trouble if your normal system uses glibc-2.1 or newer. 
 Libc5 isn't supported by this book, though it isn't impossible to use a 
 Libc5 isn't supported by this book, though it isn't impossible to use a 

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chapter01/versions.xml

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 <title>Book version</title>
 <title>Book version</title>
 
 
 <para>
 <para>
-This is LFS-BOOK-&type; version &version; version dated &releasedate;. If this 
+This is LFS-BOOK-&type; version &version; dated &releasedate;. If this 
 version is older than a month you definitely want to take a look at our 
 version is older than a month you definitely want to take a look at our 
 website and check if there is a newer version available for download.
 website and check if there is a newer version available for download.
 </para>
 </para>
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ Below you will find a list of our current HTTP and FTP mirror sites as
 of December 19th, 2000. This list might not be accurate anymore. For
 of December 19th, 2000. This list might not be accurate anymore. For
 the latest info check our website at
 the latest info check our website at
 <ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org">
 <ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org">
-http://www.linuxfromscratch.org</ulink>
+http://www.linuxfromscratch.org</ulink>.
 </para>
 </para>
 
 
 <sect2>
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