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git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@324 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
Simon Perreault преди 24 години
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      chapter01/how.xml
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      chapter01/versions.xml

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chapter01/how.xml

@@ -3,17 +3,17 @@
 
 <para>
 We are going to build the LFS system by using an already installed Linux
-distribution such as Debian, SuSe, Slackware, Mandrake, RedHat, etc. You
+distribution such as Debian, SuSE, Slackware, Mandrake, RedHat, etc. You
 don't need to have any kind of bootdisk. We will use an existing Linux
-system as the base (since we need a compiler, linker, text editor and other
-tools).
+system as the base (since we need a compiler, linker, text editor, and
+other tools).
 </para>
 
 <para>
 If you don't have Linux installed yet, you won't be able to put this
 book to use right away. I suggest you first install a Linux
 distribution. It really doesn't matter which one you install. It also 
-doesn't need to be the latest version, though it shouldn't be a too old one. 
+doesn't need to be the latest version, though it shouldn't be too old. 
 If it is about a year old or newer it should do just fine. You will save 
 yourself a lot of trouble if your normal system uses glibc-2.1 or newer. 
 Libc5 isn't supported by this book, though it isn't impossible to use a 

+ 2 - 2
chapter01/versions.xml

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 <title>Book version</title>
 
 <para>
-This is LFS-BOOK-&type; version &version; version dated &releasedate;. If this 
+This is LFS-BOOK-&type; version &version; dated &releasedate;. If this 
 version is older than a month you definitely want to take a look at our 
 website and check if there is a newer version available for download.
 </para>
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ Below you will find a list of our current HTTP and FTP mirror sites as
 of December 19th, 2000. This list might not be accurate anymore. For
 the latest info check our website at
 <ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org">
-http://www.linuxfromscratch.org</ulink>
+http://www.linuxfromscratch.org</ulink>.
 </para>
 
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