Clarify udev persistent-net-rules output

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chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -39,6 +39,10 @@
     <listitem>
       <para>2007-08-08</para>
       <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[dnicholson] - Clarify the description of the Udev persistent
+          network rules file.</para>
+        </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>[dnicholson] - Redirected <filename
           class="devicefile">/dev/tty</filename> to standard input when

chapter07/network.xml

@@ -46,10 +46,10 @@
 
 <screen><userinput>cat /etc/udev/rules.d/70-persistent-net.rules</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Each NIC takes up two lines in the file. The first line is a
-    description of the NIC itself, showing its hardware IDs (e.g. its PCI
-    vendor and device IDs, if it's a PCI card), along with its driver in
-    parentheses, if the driver can be found. This line is a comment; neither
+    <para>The file begins with a comment block followed by two lines for each
+    NIC. The first line for each NIC is a commented description showing its
+    hardware IDs (e.g. its PC vendor and device IDs, if it's a PCI card),
+    along with its driver in parentheses, if the driver can be found. Neither
     the hardware ID nor the driver is used to determine which name to give an
     interface. The second line is the Udev rule that matches this NIC and
     actually assigns it a name.</para>