chapter03: Translate

This chapter is relatively small.  Let's make it in one commit.

chapter03/chapter03.xml

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-<?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
 <!DOCTYPE chapter PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN"
   "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
   <!ENTITY % general-entities SYSTEM "../general.ent">
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
   <?dbhtml dir="chapter03"?>
   <?dbhtml filename="chapter03.html"?>
 
-  <title>Packages and Patches</title>
+  <title>软件包和补丁</title>
 
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="introduction.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="packages.xml"/>

chapter03/introduction.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
 <!DOCTYPE sect1 PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN"
   "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
   <!ENTITY % general-entities SYSTEM "../general.ent">
@@ -8,60 +8,110 @@
 <sect1 id="materials-introduction">
   <?dbhtml filename="introduction.html"?>
 
-  <title>Introduction</title>
+  <title>介绍</title>
 
-  <para>This chapter includes a list of packages that need to be downloaded in
+  <!--para>This chapter includes a list of packages that need to be downloaded in
   order to build a basic Linux system. The listed version numbers correspond to
   versions of the software that are known to work, and this book is based on
   their use. We highly recommend against using newer versions because the build
   commands for one version may not work with a newer version. The newest package
   versions may also have problems that require work-arounds. These work-arounds
   will be developed and stabilized in the development version of the
-  book.</para>
+  book.</para-->
+  <para>本章包含了构建基本的 Linux 系统时需要下载的软件包列表。
+	  我们给出的版本号对应于已经确定可以正常工作的版本，
+	  本书是基于这些版本编写的。我们强烈反对使用更新的版本，
+	  因为特定版本可用的构建命令未必适用于新版本。
+	  最新版本的软件包可能有需要排查的问题，
+	  我们会在本书的开发过程中进行排查，将解决方案找到并固定下来。</para>
 
-  <para>Download locations may not always be accessible. If a download
+  <!--para>Download locations may not always be accessible. If a download
   location has changed since this book was published, Google (<ulink
   url="http://www.google.com/"/>) provides a useful search engine for
   most packages. If this search is unsuccessful, try one of the
   alternative means of downloading discussed at <ulink
-  url="&lfs-root;lfs/packages.html#packages"/>. </para>
+  url="&lfs-root;lfs/packages.html#packages"/>. </para-->
+  <para>本书列出的下载位置可能不会一直有效。如果本书发布后，
+	  某个下载位置变了，可以用 Google
+	  (<ulink url="http://www.google.com/"/>)
+	  提供的搜索引擎可以找到大多数软件包。如果搜索不到，尝试
+	  <ulink url="&lfs-root;lfs/packages.html#packages"/>
+	  给出的备用地址。</para>
 
-  <para>Downloaded packages and patches will need to be stored somewhere
+  <!--para>Downloaded packages and patches will need to be stored somewhere
   that is conveniently available throughout the entire build. A working
   directory is also required to unpack the sources and build them.
   <filename class="directory">$LFS/sources</filename> can be used both
   as the place to store the tarballs and patches and as a working
   directory. By using this directory, the required elements will be
   located on the LFS partition and will be available during all stages
-  of the building process.</para>
+  of the building process.</para-->
+  <para>下载好的软件包和补丁需要保存在一个位置，
+	  使得整个构建过程可以容易地访问它们。另外，还需要一个工作目录，
+	  以便解压和编译软件包。我们可以把
+	  <filename class="directory">$LFS/sources</filename>
+	  既用于保存软件包和补丁，又作为工作目录。
+	  这样，我们需要的所有东西都在 LFS 分区中，
+	  因此在整个构建过程中都能够访问。</para>
 
-  <para>To create this directory, execute the following command, as user
+  <!--para>To create this directory, execute the following command, as user
   <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>, before starting the download
-  session:</para>
+  session:</para-->
+  <para>为了创建这个目录，在开始下载软件包之前，
+	  以<systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>身份执行：</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>mkdir -v $LFS/sources</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>Make this directory writable and sticky. <quote>Sticky</quote>
+  <!--para>Make this directory writable and sticky. <quote>Sticky</quote>
   means that even if multiple users have write permission on a
   directory, only the owner of a file can delete the file within a
   sticky directory. The following command will enable the write and
-  sticky modes:</para>
+  sticky modes:</para-->
+  <para>下面为该目录添加写入权限和 sticky 标志。<quote>Sticky</quote>
+	  标志使得即使有多个用户对该目录有写入权限，
+	  只有文件所有者能够删除其中的文件。输入下列命令，
+	  启用写入权限和 sticky 标志：</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>chmod -v a+wt $LFS/sources</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>An easy way to download all of the packages and patches is by using
+  <!--para>An easy way to download all of the packages and patches is by using
   <ulink url="../wget-list">wget-list</ulink> as an input to
-  <command>wget</command>. For example:</para>
+  <command>wget</command>. For example:</para-->
+  <para>一个简便地下载所有软件包和补丁的方式是使用本书附带的
+	  <ulink url="../wget-list">wget-list</ulink> 作为
+	  <command>wget</command> 命令的输入。例如：</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>wget --input-file=wget-list --continue --directory-prefix=$LFS/sources</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>Additionally, starting with LFS-7.0, there is a separate file,
+  <note><title>译注</title>
+	  <para>这些文件分布在国外的不同站点上，可能下载很慢。
+		  可以使用一个国内镜像站：</para>
+	  <screen role="nodump"><userinput>sed 's@.*/@<replaceable>ftp://mirrors.ustc.edu.cn</replaceable>/lfs/lfs-packages/8.2/@' wget-list | wget --input-file - --continue --directory-prefix=$LFS/sources</userinput></screen>
+
+	  <para>命令中的中国科学技术大学镜像站 (斜体) 可以换成其他镜像站，
+		  推荐西安电子科技大学校内用户使用内网镜像站
+		  <ulink url="https://linux.xidian.edu.cn/mirrors"/>。</para>
+  </note>
+
+  <!--para>Additionally, starting with LFS-7.0, there is a separate file,
   <ulink url="../md5sums">md5sums</ulink>, which can be used to verify that all
   the correct packages are available before proceeding.  Place that file in
-  <filename class="directory">$LFS/sources</filename> and run:</para>
+  <filename class="directory">$LFS/sources</filename> and run:</para-->
+  <para>另外，自 LFS-7.0 以来，本书提供一个单独的文件
+	  <ulink url="../md5sums">md5sums</ulink>，用来检查所有软件包的正确性。
+	  将该文件复制到<filename class="directory">$LFS/sources</filename>，
+	  运行下列命令即可得到检查结果：</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>pushd $LFS/sources
 md5sum -c md5sums
 popd</userinput></screen>
 
+  <note><title>译注</title>
+	  <para><filename>wget-list</filename> 和 <filename>md5sum</filename>
+		  文件是 sysvinit 版本和 systemd 版本共用的，
+		  下载到的少数几个<quote>多余</quote>软件包属于另一个版本。
+	  </para>
+  </note>
+
+
 </sect1>

chapter03/packages.xml

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+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
 <!DOCTYPE sect1 PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN"
   "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
   <!ENTITY % general-entities SYSTEM "../general.ent">
@@ -8,196 +8,200 @@
 <sect1 id="materials-packages">
   <?dbhtml filename="packages.html"?>
 
-  <title>All Packages</title>
+  <title>所有软件包</title>
 
-  <para>Download or otherwise obtain the following packages:</para>
+  <para>下载或者用其他方法获取下列软件包:</para>
 
   <variablelist role="materials">
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Acl (&acl-version;) - <token>&acl-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&acl-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&acl-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&acl-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&acl-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&acl-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&acl-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Attr (&attr-version;) - <token>&attr-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&attr-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&attr-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&attr-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&attr-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&attr-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&attr-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Autoconf (&autoconf-version;) - <token>&autoconf-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&autoconf-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&autoconf-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&autoconf-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&autoconf-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&autoconf-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&autoconf-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Automake (&automake-version;) - <token>&automake-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&automake-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&automake-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&automake-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&automake-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&automake-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&automake-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Bash (&bash-version;) - <token>&bash-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&bash-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&bash-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&bash-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&bash-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&bash-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&bash-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Bc (&bc-version;) - <token>&bc-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&bc-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&bc-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&bc-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&bc-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&bc-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&bc-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Binutils (&binutils-version;) - <token>&binutils-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&binutils-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&binutils-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&binutils-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&binutils-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&binutils-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&binutils-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Bison (&bison-version;) - <token>&bison-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&bison-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&bison-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&bison-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&bison-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&bison-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&bison-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Bzip2 (&bzip2-version;) - <token>&bzip2-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&bzip2-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&bzip2-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&bzip2-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&bzip2-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&bzip2-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&bzip2-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Check (&check-version;) - <token>&check-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&check-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&check-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&check-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&check-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&check-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&check-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Coreutils (&coreutils-version;) - <token>&coreutils-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&coreutils-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&coreutils-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&coreutils-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&coreutils-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&coreutils-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&coreutils-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry revision="systemd">
       <term>D-Bus (&dbus-version;) - <token>&dbus-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&dbus-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&dbus-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&dbus-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&dbus-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&dbus-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&dbus-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>DejaGNU (&dejagnu-version;) - <token>&dejagnu-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&dejagnu-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&dejagnu-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&dejagnu-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&dejagnu-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&dejagnu-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&dejagnu-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Diffutils (&diffutils-version;) - <token>&diffutils-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&diffutils-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&diffutils-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&diffutils-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&diffutils-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&diffutils-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&diffutils-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry revision="sysv">
       <term>Eudev (&eudev-version;) - <token>&eudev-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&eudev-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&eudev-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&eudev-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&eudev-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>E2fsprogs (&e2fsprogs-version;) - <token>&e2fsprogs-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&e2fsprogs-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&e2fsprogs-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&e2fsprogs-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&e2fsprogs-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&e2fsprogs-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&e2fsprogs-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Elfutils (&elfutils-version;) - <token>&elfutils-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&elfutils-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&elfutils-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&elfutils-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&elfutils-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&elfutils-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&elfutils-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Expat (&expat-version;) - <token>&expat-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&expat-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&expat-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&expat-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&expat-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&expat-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&expat-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Expect (&expect-version;) - <token>&expect-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&expect-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&expect-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&expect-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&expect-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&expect-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&expect-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>File (&file-version;) - <token>&file-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&file-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&file-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&file-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&file-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&file-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&file-md5;</literal></para>
 
         <note>
-          <para>File (&file-version;) may no longer be available at the
+          <!--para>File (&file-version;) may no longer be available at the
           listed location. The site administrators of the master download
           location occasionally remove older versions when new ones are
           released. An alternative download location that may have the correct
           version available can also be found at: <ulink
-          url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/download.html#ftp"/>.</para>
+          url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/download.html#ftp"/>.</para-->
+          <para>File (&file-version;) 可能已经不能从列表中给出的位置下载。
+			  该地址的网站管理员在发布新版本后有时会删除旧版本。访问
+<ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/lfs/download.html#ftp"/>
+			  中的备用下载地址，可能找到正确的版本。</para>
         </note>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
@@ -205,67 +209,70 @@
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Findutils (&findutils-version;) - <token>&findutils-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&findutils-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&findutils-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&findutils-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&findutils-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&findutils-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&findutils-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Flex (&flex-version;) - <token>&flex-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&flex-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&flex-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&flex-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&flex-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&flex-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&flex-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Gawk (&gawk-version;) - <token>&gawk-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&gawk-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&gawk-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&gawk-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&gawk-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&gawk-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&gawk-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>GCC (&gcc-version;) - <token>&gcc-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&gcc-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&gcc-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&gcc-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&gcc-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&gcc-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&gcc-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>GDBM (&gdbm-version;) - <token>&gdbm-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&gdbm-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&gdbm-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&gdbm-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&gdbm-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&gdbm-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&gdbm-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Gettext (&gettext-version;) - <token>&gettext-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&gettext-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&gettext-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&gettext-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&gettext-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&gettext-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&gettext-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Glibc (&glibc-version;) - <token>&glibc-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&glibc-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&glibc-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&glibc-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&glibc-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&glibc-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&glibc-md5;</literal></para>
         <note>
-          <para>This version of glibc addresses a security issue 
+          <!--para>This version of glibc addresses a security issue 
           not yet in the latest stable release.  
-          </para>
+          </para-->
+		  <title>译注</title>
+		  <para>原书在这里有一个<quote>注意</quote>框，
+		  	  但其中的内容已经不再适用，译者把它删掉了。</para>
         </note>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
@@ -273,364 +280,379 @@
     <varlistentry>
       <term>GMP (&gmp-version;) - <token>&gmp-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&gmp-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&gmp-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&gmp-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&gmp-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&gmp-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&gmp-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Gperf (&gperf-version;) - <token>&gperf-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&gperf-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&gperf-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&gperf-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&gperf-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&gperf-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&gperf-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Grep (&grep-version;) - <token>&grep-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&grep-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&grep-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&grep-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&grep-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&grep-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&grep-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Groff (&groff-version;) - <token>&groff-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&groff-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&groff-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&groff-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&groff-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&groff-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&groff-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>GRUB (&grub-version;) - <token>&grub-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&grub-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&grub-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&grub-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&grub-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&grub-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&grub-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Gzip (&gzip-version;) - <token>&gzip-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&gzip-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&gzip-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&gzip-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&gzip-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&gzip-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&gzip-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Iana-Etc (&iana-etc-version;) - <token>&iana-etc-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&iana-etc-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&iana-etc-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&iana-etc-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&iana-etc-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&iana-etc-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&iana-etc-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Inetutils (&inetutils-version;) - <token>&inetutils-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&inetutils-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&inetutils-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&inetutils-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&inetutils-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&inetutils-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&inetutils-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Intltool (&intltool-version;) - <token>&intltool-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&intltool-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&intltool-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&intltool-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&intltool-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&intltool-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&intltool-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>IPRoute2 (&iproute2-version;) - <token>&iproute2-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&iproute2-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&iproute2-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&iproute2-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&iproute2-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&iproute2-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&iproute2-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Kbd (&kbd-version;) - <token>&kbd-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&kbd-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&kbd-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&kbd-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&kbd-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&kbd-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&kbd-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Kmod (&kmod-version;) - <token>&kmod-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&kmod-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&kmod-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&kmod-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&kmod-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&kmod-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&kmod-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Less (&less-version;) - <token>&less-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&less-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&less-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&less-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&less-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&less-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&less-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry revision="sysv">
       <term>LFS-Bootscripts (&lfs-bootscripts-version;) - <token>&lfs-bootscripts-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&lfs-bootscripts-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&lfs-bootscripts-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&lfs-bootscripts-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&lfs-bootscripts-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&lfs-bootscripts-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&lfs-bootscripts-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Libcap (&libcap-version;) - <token>&libcap-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&libcap-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&libcap-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&libcap-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&libcap-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&libcap-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&libcap-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Libffi (&libffi-version;) - <token>&libffi-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&libffi-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&libffi-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&libffi-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&libffi-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&libffi-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&libffi-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Libpipeline (&libpipeline-version;) - <token>&libpipeline-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&libpipeline-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&libpipeline-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&libpipeline-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&libpipeline-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&libpipeline-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&libpipeline-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Libtool (&libtool-version;) - <token>&libtool-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&libtool-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&libtool-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&libtool-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&libtool-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&libtool-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&libtool-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Linux (&linux-version;) - <token>&linux-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&linux-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&linux-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&linux-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&linux-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&linux-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&linux-md5;</literal></para>
 
         <note>
-          <para>The Linux kernel is updated relatively often, many times due to
+          <!--para>The Linux kernel is updated relatively often, many times due to
           discoveries of security vulnerabilities.  The latest available
           &linux-major-version;.&linux-minor-version;.x kernel version should be
-          used, unless the errata page says otherwise.</para>
+          used, unless the errata page says otherwise.</para-->
+          <para>Linux 内核的更新相对较为频繁，
+          多数情况下是为了解决新发现的安全问题。
+		  除非勘误页明确说明，应该使用最新的
+		  &linux-major-version;.&linux-minor-version;.x 版本内核。</para>
 
-          <para>For users with limited speed or expensive bandwidth who wish to
+          <!--para>For users with limited speed or expensive bandwidth who wish to
           update the Linux kernel, a baseline version of the package and
           patches can be downloaded separately.  This may save some time or
           cost for a subsequent patch level upgrade within a minor release.
-          </para>
+          </para-->
+		  <para>对于那些上网很慢或者流量很贵的用户来说，
+			  可以分别下载内核的基线版本和补丁。这可以节省内核补丁版本
+			  (patch level) 升级时的下载时间和网费。</para>
 
         </note>
+		<note><title>译注</title>
+			<para>西安电子科技大学校园网完全满足 <quote>上网很慢</quote>
+				和 <quote> 流量很贵 </quote> 的条件。
+				甚至对于内核的增量补丁，译者仍然强烈建议使用校内内核镜像
+				<ulink url=
+					"https://linux.xidian.edu.cn/mirrors/linux-kernel"/>
+				下载。</para>
+		</note>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>M4 (&m4-version;) - <token>&m4-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&m4-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&m4-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&m4-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&m4-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&m4-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&m4-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Make (&make-version;) - <token>&make-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&make-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&make-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&make-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&make-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&make-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&make-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Man-DB (&man-db-version;) - <token>&man-db-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&man-db-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&man-db-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&man-db-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&man-db-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&man-db-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&man-db-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Man-pages (&man-pages-version;) - <token>&man-pages-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&man-pages-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&man-pages-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&man-pages-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&man-pages-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&man-pages-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&man-pages-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Meson (&meson-version;) - <token>&meson-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&meson-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&meson-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&meson-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&meson-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&meson-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&meson-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>MPC (&mpc-version;) - <token>&mpc-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&mpc-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&mpc-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&mpc-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&mpc-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&mpc-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&mpc-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>MPFR (&mpfr-version;) - <token>&mpfr-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&mpfr-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&mpfr-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&mpfr-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&mpfr-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&mpfr-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&mpfr-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Ninja (&ninja-version;) - <token>&ninja-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&ninja-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&ninja-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&ninja-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&ninja-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&ninja-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&ninja-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Ncurses (&ncurses-version;) - <token>&ncurses-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&ncurses-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&ncurses-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&ncurses-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&ncurses-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&ncurses-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&ncurses-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>OpenSSL (&openssl-version;) - <token>&openssl-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&openssl-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&openssl-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&openssl-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&openssl-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&openssl-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&openssl-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Patch (&patch-version;) - <token>&patch-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&patch-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&patch-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&patch-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&patch-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&patch-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&patch-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Perl (&perl-version;) - <token>&perl-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&perl-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&perl-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&perl-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&perl-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&perl-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&perl-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Pkg-config (&pkgconfig-version;) - <token>&pkgconfig-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&pkgconfig-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&pkgconfig-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&pkgconfig-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&pkgconfig-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&pkgconfig-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&pkgconfig-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Procps (&procps-ng-version;) - <token>&procps-ng-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&procps-ng-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&procps-ng-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&procps-ng-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&procps-ng-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&procps-ng-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&procps-ng-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Psmisc (&psmisc-version;) - <token>&psmisc-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&psmisc-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&psmisc-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&psmisc-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&psmisc-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&psmisc-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&psmisc-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Python (&python-version;) - <token>&python-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&python-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&python-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&python-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&python-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&python-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&python-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Python Documentation (&python-version;) - <token>&python-docs-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&python-docs-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&python-docs-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&python-docs-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&python-docs-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Readline (&readline-version;) - <token>&readline-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&readline-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&readline-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&readline-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&readline-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&readline-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&readline-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Sed (&sed-version;) - <token>&sed-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&sed-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&sed-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&sed-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&sed-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&sed-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&sed-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Shadow (&shadow-version;) - <token>&shadow-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <!-- <para>Home page: <ulink url="&shadow-home;"/></para> -->
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&shadow-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&shadow-md5;</literal></para>
+        <!-- <para>主页: <ulink url="&shadow-home;"/></para> -->
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&shadow-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&shadow-md5;</literal></para>
 
         <!-- Using http://cdn.debian.net/debian/pool/main/s/shadow/
              for now since alioth has not reconstituted shadow -->
@@ -640,32 +662,34 @@
     <varlistentry revision="sysv">
       <term>Sysklogd (&sysklogd-version;) - <token>&sysklogd-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&sysklogd-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&sysklogd-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&sysklogd-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&sysklogd-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&sysklogd-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&sysklogd-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry revision="systemd">
       <term>Systemd (&systemd-version;) - <token>&systemd-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&systemd-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&systemd-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&systemd-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&systemd-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&systemd-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&systemd-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry revision="systemd">
       <term>Systemd Man Pages(&systemd-version;) - <token>&systemd-man-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&systemd-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&systemd-man-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&systemd-man-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&systemd-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&systemd-man-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&systemd-man-md5;</literal></para>
 
         <note>
-          <para>The Linux From Scratch team generates its own tarball of the
+          <!--para>The Linux From Scratch team generates its own tarball of the
           man pages using the systemd source. This is done in order to avoid
-          unnecessary dependencies.</para>
+          unnecessary dependencies.</para-->
+          <para>Linux From Scratch 团队自行从 systemd 源码生成了其 man
+			  页面的压缩包，以避免不必要的依赖项。</para>
         </note>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
@@ -674,103 +698,103 @@
     <varlistentry revision="sysv">
       <term>Sysvinit (&sysvinit-version;) - <token>&sysvinit-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&sysvinit-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&sysvinit-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&sysvinit-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&sysvinit-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&sysvinit-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&sysvinit-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Tar (&tar-version;) - <token>&tar-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&tar-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&tar-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&tar-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&tar-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&tar-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&tar-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Tcl (&tcl-version;) - <token>&tcl-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&tcl-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&tcl-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&tcl-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&tcl-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&tcl-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&tcl-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Texinfo (&texinfo-version;) - <token>&texinfo-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&texinfo-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&texinfo-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&texinfo-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&texinfo-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&texinfo-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&texinfo-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Time Zone Data (&tzdata-version;) - <token>&tzdata-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&tzdata-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&tzdata-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&tzdata-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&tzdata-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&tzdata-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&tzdata-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry revision="sysv">
       <term>Udev-lfs Tarball (&udev-lfs-version;) - <token>&udev-lfs-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&udev-lfs-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&udev-lfs-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&udev-lfs-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&udev-lfs-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Util-linux (&util-linux-version;) - <token>&util-linux-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&util-linux-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&util-linux-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&util-linux-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&util-linux-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&util-linux-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&util-linux-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Vim (&vim-version;) - <token>&vim-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&vim-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&vim-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&vim-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&vim-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&vim-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&vim-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>XML::Parser (&xml-parser-version;) - <token>&xml-parser-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&xml-parser-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&xml-parser-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&xml-parser-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&xml-parser-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&xml-parser-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&xml-parser-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Xz Utils (&xz-version;) - <token>&xz-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&xz-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&xz-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&xz-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&xz-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&xz-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&xz-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
       <term>Zlib (&zlib-version;) - <token>&zlib-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Home page: <ulink url="&zlib-home;"/></para>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&zlib-url;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&zlib-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>主页: <ulink url="&zlib-home;"/></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&zlib-url;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&zlib-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
   </variablelist>
 
-  <para>Total size of these packages: about <returnvalue/></para>
+  <para>这些软件包的总计大小: 约 <returnvalue/></para>
 
 </sect1>

chapter03/patches.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
 <!DOCTYPE sect1 PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN"
   "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
   <!ENTITY % general-entities SYSTEM "../general.ent">
@@ -8,13 +8,16 @@
 <sect1 id="materials-patches">
   <?dbhtml filename="patches.html"?>
 
-  <title>Needed Patches</title>
+  <title>必要的补丁</title>
 
-  <para>In addition to the packages, several patches are also required.
+  <!--para>In addition to the packages, several patches are also required.
   These patches correct any mistakes in the packages that should be
   fixed by the maintainer.  The patches also make small modifications to
   make the packages easier to work with. The following patches will be
-  needed to build an LFS system:</para>
+  needed to build an LFS system:</para-->
+  <para>除了软件包外，我们还需要几个补丁。
+	  补丁有的修复了本应由维护者修复的问题，有的对软件包进行微小的修改，
+	  使得它们更容易使用。构建 LFS 系统需要下列补丁：</para>
 
   <variablelist role="materials">
 <!--
@@ -36,18 +39,18 @@
     </varlistentry>
 -->
     <varlistentry>
-      <term>Bzip2 Documentation Patch - <token>&bzip2-docs-patch-size;</token>:</term>
+      <term>Bzip2 文档补丁 - <token>&bzip2-docs-patch-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&patches-root;&bzip2-docs-patch;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&bzip2-docs-patch-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&patches-root;&bzip2-docs-patch;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&bzip2-docs-patch-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
-      <term>Coreutils Internationalization Fixes Patch - <token>&coreutils-i18n-patch-size;</token>:</term>
+      <term>Coreutils 国际化修复补丁 - <token>&coreutils-i18n-patch-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&patches-root;&coreutils-i18n-patch;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&coreutils-i18n-patch-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&patches-root;&coreutils-i18n-patch;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&coreutils-i18n-patch-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 <!--
@@ -69,10 +72,10 @@
     </varlistentry>
 -->
     <varlistentry>
-      <term>Glibc FHS Patch - <token>&glibc-fhs-patch-size;</token>:</term>
+      <term>Glibc FHS 补丁 - <token>&glibc-fhs-patch-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&patches-root;&glibc-fhs-patch;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&glibc-fhs-patch-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&patches-root;&glibc-fhs-patch;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&glibc-fhs-patch-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 <!--
@@ -85,18 +88,18 @@
     </varlistentry>
 -->
     <varlistentry>
-      <term>Kbd Backspace/Delete Fix Patch - <token>&kbd-backspace-patch-size;</token>:</term>
+		<term>Kbd 退格/删除修复补丁 - <token>&kbd-backspace-patch-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&patches-root;&kbd-backspace-patch;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&kbd-backspace-patch-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&patches-root;&kbd-backspace-patch;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&kbd-backspace-patch-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
-      <term>Ninja Limit Jobs Patch - <token>&ninja-limit-jobs-patch-size;</token>:</term>
+      <term>Ninja 并行编译限制补丁 - <token>&ninja-limit-jobs-patch-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&patches-root;&ninja-limit-jobs-patch;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&ninja-limit-jobs-patch-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&patches-root;&ninja-limit-jobs-patch;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&ninja-limit-jobs-patch-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 <!--
@@ -109,10 +112,10 @@
     </varlistentry>
 -->
     <varlistentry revision="sysv">
-      <term>Sysvinit Consolidated Patch - <token>&sysvinit-consolidated-patch-size;</token>:</term>
+      <term>Sysvinit 累积更新补丁 - <token>&sysvinit-consolidated-patch-size;</token>:</term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Download: <ulink url="&patches-root;&sysvinit-consolidated-patch;"/></para>
-        <para>MD5 sum: <literal>&sysvinit-consolidated-patch-md5;</literal></para>
+        <para>下载地址: <ulink url="&patches-root;&sysvinit-consolidated-patch;"/></para>
+        <para>MD5 校验和: <literal>&sysvinit-consolidated-patch-md5;</literal></para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
 
@@ -128,13 +131,17 @@
 
   </variablelist>
 
-  <para>Total size of these patches: about <returnvalue/></para>
+  <para>以上补丁的总大小: 约 <returnvalue/></para>
 
-  <para>In addition to the above required patches, there exist a number of
+  <!--para>In addition to the above required patches, there exist a number of
   optional patches created by the LFS community. These optional patches
   solve minor problems or enable functionality that is not enabled by
   default. Feel free to peruse the patches database located at
   <ulink url="&lfs-root;patches/downloads/"/> and acquire any additional
-  patches to suit your system needs.</para>
+  patches to suit your system needs.</para-->
+  <para>除了上述必要的补丁外，LFS 社区还创建了一些可选补丁。
+	  它们有的解决了一些微小的问题，有的启用了一些默认没有启用的功能。
+	  您可以浏览 <ulink url="&lfs-root;patches/downloads/"/>
+	  查询 LFS 补丁库，并获取各种适合您需求的补丁。</para>
 
 </sect1>