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Grammatic changes to chapter 6.

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chapter06/creatingdirs.xml

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ directory of root, and another to the directories for temporary files.</para>
 <para><screen><userinput>chmod 0750 /root &amp;&amp;
 chmod 1777 /tmp /var/tmp</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>The first mode change ensures that not just everybody can enter the
+<para>The first mode change ensures that not just anybody can enter the
 <filename class="directory">/root</filename> directory -- the same
 as a normal user would do with his or her home directory.
 The second mode change makes sure that any user can write to the
@@ -39,11 +39,6 @@ The second mode change makes sure that any user can write to the
 cannot remove other users' files from them. The latter is prohibited
 by the so-called "sticky bit" -- the highest bit in the 1777 bit mask.</para>
 
-<para>Now that the directories are created, move the source tarballs that
-were downloaded in Chapter 3 to some subdirectory under
-<filename class="directory">/usr/src</filename> (you
-will have to create the desired subdirectory yourself).</para>
-
 <sect2>
 <title>FHS compliance note</title>
 

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chapter06/flex-inst.xml

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
 
 <para><screen><userinput>make install</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>There are which packages expect to find the flex library
+<para>There are packages which expect to find the flex library
 in the <filename>/usr/lib</filename> directory. Create a symlink
 to account for this:</para>
 

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chapter06/gcc-inst.xml

@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ is implemented.</para></listitem>
 <para><screen><userinput>make bootstrap</userinput></screen></para>
 
 <para>The <emphasis>bootstrap</emphasis> target doesn't just compile GCC, but
-it compiles GCC a multiple times. It uses the first compiled programs to
+it compiles GCC multiple times. It uses the first compiled programs to
 compile itself a second and third time to make sure the compiler was compiled
 properly.</para>
 

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chapter06/zlib-inst.xml

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ shared and static libraries:</para>
 <filename>/lib</filename> directory. That way, in the event
 that you must boot without the <filename>/usr</filename>
 directory, vital system programs will still have access to
-the library. Finish installing shared library:</para>
+the library. Finish installing the shared library:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>mv /usr/lib/libz.so.* /lib</userinput></screen></para>