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				|  |  |  <listitem>
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				|  |  |  <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug"><primary
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				|  |  |  sortas="b-hotplug">hotplug</primary></indexterm>
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				|  |  | -<para>This script is called by default by Linux kernel when something
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				|  |  | +<para>This script is called by default by the Linux kernel when something
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				|  |  |  changes in its internal state (e.g., a new device is added or removed).</para>
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				|  |  |  </listitem>
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				|  |  |  </varlistentry>
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				|  | @@ -95,14 +95,12 @@ changes in its internal state (e.g., a new device is added or removed).</para>
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				|  |  |  <listitem>
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				|  |  |  <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-rc"><primary
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				|  |  |  sortas="d-/etc/hotplug/*.rc">/etc/hotplug/*.rc</primary></indexterm>
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				|  |  | -<para>These scripts are used for cold plugging, i.e., detection and other
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				|  |  | -specific actions upon hardware already present during system startup. 
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				|  |  | -They are called by the <filename>hotplug</filename> initscript that comes
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				|  |  | -from the LFS-Bootscripts package.
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				|  |  | -The <command>*.rc</command>
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				|  |  | -scripts try to recover hotplug events that were lost during system boot
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				|  |  | -because, e.g., the root filesystem was not mounted by the kernel.
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				|  |  | -</para>
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				|  |  | +<para>These scripts are used for cold plugging, i.e., detecting and acting upon
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				|  |  | +hardware already present during system startup.  They are called by the
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				|  |  | +<filename>hotplug</filename> initscript that comes from the LFS-Bootscripts
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				|  |  | +package.  The <command>*.rc</command> scripts try to recover hotplug events that
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				|  |  | +were lost during system boot because, for example, the root filesystem was not
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				|  |  | +mounted by the kernel.</para>
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				|  |  |  </listitem>
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				|  |  |  </varlistentry>
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				|  |  |  
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				|  | @@ -113,8 +111,8 @@ because, e.g., the root filesystem was not mounted by the kernel.
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				|  |  |  sortas="d-/etc/hotplug/*.agent">/etc/hotplug/*.agent</primary></indexterm>
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				|  |  |  <para>These scripts are called by <command>hotplug</command>
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				|  |  |  in response to different types of hotplug events generated by the kernel.
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				|  |  | -Their action is to insert corresponding kernel modules and call user-provided
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				|  |  | -scripts, if any.
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				|  |  | +Their action is to insert corresponding kernel modules and call any
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				|  |  | +user-provided scripts.
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				|  |  |  </para>
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				|  |  |  </listitem>
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				|  |  |  </varlistentry>
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				|  | @@ -124,7 +122,7 @@ scripts, if any.
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				|  |  |  <listitem>
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				|  |  |  <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-functions"><primary
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				|  |  |  sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/hotplug.functions">/etc/hotplug/hotplug.functions</primary></indexterm>
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				|  |  | -<para>This file contains common functions used by other scripts in Hotplug
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				|  |  | +<para>This file contains common functions used by other scripts in the Hotplug
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				|  |  |  package.
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				|  |  |  </para>
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				|  |  |  </listitem>
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				|  | @@ -135,8 +133,8 @@ package.
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				|  |  |  <listitem>
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				|  |  |  <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-blacklist"><primary
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				|  |  |  sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/blacklist">/etc/hotplug/blacklist</primary></indexterm>
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				|  |  | -<para>This file contains the list of modules that should never be
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				|  |  | -inserted into the kernel by hotplug scripts.
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				|  |  | +<para>This file contains the list of modules that should never be inserted into
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				|  |  | +the kernel by the hotplug scripts.
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				|  |  |  </para>
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				|  |  |  </listitem>
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				|  |  |  </varlistentry>
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				|  | @@ -146,8 +144,7 @@ inserted into the kernel by hotplug scripts.
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				|  |  |  <listitem>
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				|  |  |  <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-subdirs"><primary
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				|  |  |  sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/{pci,usb}">/etc/hotplug/{pci,usb}</primary></indexterm>
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				|  |  | -<para>These directories are supposed to contain user-written handlers for
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				|  |  | -hotplug events.
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				|  |  | +<para>These directories contain user-written handlers for hotplug events.
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				|  |  |  </para>
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				|  |  |  </listitem>
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				|  |  |  </varlistentry>
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				|  | @@ -158,7 +155,7 @@ hotplug events.
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				|  |  |  <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-usb.usermap"><primary
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				|  |  |  sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/usb.usermap">/etc/hotplug/usb.usermap</primary></indexterm>
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				|  |  |  <para>This file contains rules that determine which user-defined handlers to
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				|  |  | -call for each USB device, based on its vendor, id and other attributes.
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				|  |  | +call for each USB device, based on its vendor ID and other attributes.
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				|  |  |  </para>
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				|  |  |  </listitem>
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				|  |  |  </varlistentry>
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				|  | @@ -168,7 +165,7 @@ call for each USB device, based on its vendor, id and other attributes.
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				|  |  |  <listitem>
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				|  |  |  <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-events"><primary
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				|  |  |  sortas="e-/var/log/hotplug/events">/var/log/hotplug/events</primary></indexterm>
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				|  |  | -<para>This file contains all the events since bootup that hotplug has called.
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				|  |  | +<para>This file contains all the events that hotplug has called since bootup.
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				|  |  |  </para>
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				|  |  |  </listitem>
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				|  |  |  </varlistentry>
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				|  | @@ -178,10 +175,9 @@ sortas="e-/var/log/hotplug/events">/var/log/hotplug/events</primary></indexterm>
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				|  |  |  <listitem>
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				|  |  |  <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-hotplug.d"><primary
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				|  |  |  sortas="e-/etc/hotplug.d">/etc/hotplug.d</primary></indexterm>
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				|  |  | -<para>This directory contains programs (or symlinks to them)
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				|  |  | -that are interested in receiving hotplug events. E.g.,
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				|  |  | -<application>Udev</application> puts its symlink here during installation.
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				|  |  | -</para>
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				|  |  | +<para>This directory contains programs (or symlinks to them) that are interested
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				|  |  | +in receiving hotplug events. For example, <application>Udev</application> puts
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				|  |  | +its symlink here during installation.</para>
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				|  |  |  </listitem>
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				|  |  |  </varlistentry>
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				|  |  |  
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				|  | @@ -190,9 +186,8 @@ that are interested in receiving hotplug events. E.g.,
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				|  |  |  <listitem>
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				|  |  |  <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-firmware"><primary
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				|  |  |  sortas="e-/lib/firmware">/lib/firmware</primary></indexterm>
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				|  |  | -<para>This directory contains the firmware for devices that
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				|  |  | -need to have there firmware loaded before use.
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				|  |  | -</para>
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				|  |  | +<para>This directory contains the firmware for devices that need to have their
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				|  |  | +firmware loaded before use.</para>
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				|  |  |  </listitem>
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				|  |  |  </varlistentry>
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