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Mark Hymers 24 年之前
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      chapter02/download.xml
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      chapter02/install.xml

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chapter02/download.xml

@@ -6,10 +6,10 @@ packages that were downloaded are placed somewhere in $LFS/usr/src.</para>
 
 
 <para>I use the convention of having a $LFS/usr/src/sources directory.
 <para>I use the convention of having a $LFS/usr/src/sources directory.
 Under sources, I have the directory 0-9 and the directories a
 Under sources, I have the directory 0-9 and the directories a
-through z. A package like sysvinit-2.78.tar.gz is stored under
-$LFS/usr/src/sources/s/. A package like bash-2.04.tar.gz is stored under 
-$LFS/usr/src/sources/b/, and so forth. This convention does not have to be
-followed, of course; I was just giving an example. It's better to keep 
+through z. A package like sysvinit-&sysvinit-version;.tar.bz2 is stored under
+$LFS/usr/src/sources/s/. A package like bash-&bash-version;.tar.bz2 is stored 
+under  $LFS/usr/src/sources/b/, and so forth. This convention does not have to 
+be followed, of course; I was just giving an example. It's better to keep 
 the packages out of $LFS/usr/src and move them to a subdirectory, so 
 the packages out of $LFS/usr/src and move them to a subdirectory, so 
 we'll have a clean $LFS/usr/src directory in which we will unpack the 
 we'll have a clean $LFS/usr/src directory in which we will unpack the 
 packages and work with them.</para>
 packages and work with them.</para>

+ 2 - 2
chapter02/install.xml

@@ -31,8 +31,8 @@ running:</para>
 
 
 <para>Some tar programs (most of them nowadays but not all of them) are
 <para>Some tar programs (most of them nowadays but not all of them) are
 slightly modified to be able to use bzip2 files directly using either
 slightly modified to be able to use bzip2 files directly using either
-the I or the y tar parameter, which works the same as the z tar parameter
-to handle gzip archives. The above construction works no matter how
+the I, the y or the j tar parameter, which works the same as the z tar 
+parameter to handle gzip archives. The above construction works no matter how
 your host system decided to patch bzip2.</para>
 your host system decided to patch bzip2.</para>
 
 
 <para>If a file is just tar'ed, it is unpacked by running:</para>
 <para>If a file is just tar'ed, it is unpacked by running:</para>