You

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@332 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

chapter04/chapter04.xml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <chapter id="chapter03">
-<title>Packages you need to download</title>
+<title>Packages that need to be downloaded</title>
 
 &c3-introduction;
 &c3-packages;

chapter04/introduction.xml

@@ -2,11 +2,13 @@
 <title>Introduction</title>
 
 <para>
-Below is a list of all the packages you need to download for building
+Below is a list of all the packages that are needed to download for building
 the basic system. The version numbers printed correspond to versions of
-the software that is known to work and which this book is based on. If you
-experience problems which you can't solve yourself, download the version that
-is assumed in this book (in case you downloaded a newer version).
+the software that is known to work and which this book is based on. 
+If the user 
+experiences problems which he can't solve himself, he should download the
+version that
+is assumed in this book (in case he downloaded a newer version).
 </para>
 
 <para>
@@ -20,15 +22,15 @@ Version</ulink>
 We have provided a list of official download sites of the packages below
 in <ulink url="appendixc.html">Appendix C - Official download locations
 </ulink>. The LFS FTP archive only contains the versions of packages 
-that are recommended for use in this book. If you're looking
-for newer versions than the ones listed here you can have a look in 
-Appendix C.
+that are recommended for use in this book. Newer versions than the ones
+listed here might be found after having a look in Appendix C.
 </para>
 
 <para>
 Please note that all files downloaded from the LFS FTP archive are files
-compressed with bzip2 instead of gz. If you don't know how to handle bz2
-files, please read <ulink url="ch02-install.html">Chapter 2 - How to install
+compressed with bzip2 instead of gz. If the user does not know how to
+handle bz2
+files, he should read <ulink url="ch02-install.html">Chapter 2 - How to install
 the software</ulink>.
 </para>
 

chapter04/packages.xml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <sect1 id="ch03-packages">
-<title>Packages you need to download</title>
+<title>Packages that need to be downloaded</title>
 
 <literallayout>