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Bruce Dubbs 9 年之前
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      chapter01/changelog.xml
  2. 1 1
      chapter05/toolchaintechnotes.xml

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chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -45,11 +45,14 @@
    <listitem>
    <listitem>
       <para>2016-08-22</para>
       <para>2016-08-22</para>
       <itemizedlist>
       <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[bdubbs] - Release LFS-7.10-rc1.</para>
+        </listitem>
         <listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>[bdubbs] - Update to linux-4.7.2. Fixes
           <para>[bdubbs] - Update to linux-4.7.2. Fixes
           <ulink url="&lfs-ticket-root;3972">#3972</ulink>.</para>
           <ulink url="&lfs-ticket-root;3972">#3972</ulink>.</para>
         </listitem>
         </listitem>
-    <listitem revision="systemd">
+        <listitem revision="systemd">
           <para>[bdubbs] - Update to dbus-1.10.10. Fixes
           <para>[bdubbs] - Update to dbus-1.10.10. Fixes
           <ulink url="&lfs-ticket-root;3967">#3967</ulink>.</para>
           <ulink url="&lfs-ticket-root;3967">#3967</ulink>.</para>
         </listitem> 
         </listitem> 

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chapter05/toolchaintechnotes.xml

@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ checking what linker to use... /tools/i686-lfs-linux-gnu/bin/ld</computeroutput>
   for building Glibc are the compiler, binary tools, and kernel headers. The
   for building Glibc are the compiler, binary tools, and kernel headers. The
   compiler is generally not an issue since Glibc will always use the compiler
   compiler is generally not an issue since Glibc will always use the compiler
   relating to the <parameter>--host</parameter> parameter passed to its
   relating to the <parameter>--host</parameter> parameter passed to its
-  configure script, e.g. in our case,
+  configure script; e.g. in our case, the compiler will be
   <command>i686-lfs-linux-gnu-gcc</command>. The binary tools and kernel
   <command>i686-lfs-linux-gnu-gcc</command>. The binary tools and kernel
   headers can be a bit more complicated. Therefore, take no risks and use the
   headers can be a bit more complicated. Therefore, take no risks and use the
   available configure switches to enforce the correct selections. After the run
   available configure switches to enforce the correct selections. After the run