Patch from Chris Staub with various fixes

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@7935 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -39,6 +39,11 @@
     <listitem>
       <para>2007-02-23</para>
       <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[dnicholson] - Applied a patch from Chris Staub to fix some
+          commands and text on the kernel file systems, E2fsprogs and
+          Autoconf pages.</para>
+        </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>[dnicholson] - Dropped the -D switch from the Udev
           documentation install command since it is already created by

chapter06/autoconf.xml

@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
 
     <para>To test the results, issue:
     <userinput>make check</userinput>.
-    This takes a long time, about 3 SBUs.  In addition, 2 test are skipped
+    This takes a long time, about 3 SBUs.  In addition, 6 tests are skipped
     that use Automake.  For full test coverage, Autoconf can be re-tested
     after Automake has been installed.</para>
 

chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml

@@ -42,8 +42,8 @@
 
     <screen><userinput>sed -i -e 's@/bin/rm@/tools&amp;@' lib/blkid/test_probe.in</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>It is recommended that E2fsprogs be built in a subdirectory of
-    the source tree: </para>
+    <para>The E2fsprogs documentation recommends that the package be built in
+    a subdirectory of the source tree: </para>
 
 <screen><userinput>mkdir -v build
 cd build</userinput></screen>
@@ -106,11 +106,11 @@ cd build</userinput></screen>
     <xref linkend="space-mounting"/> for details on creating and enabling
     swap space.</para>
 
-    <para>Install the binaries and documentation:</para>
+    <para>Install the binaries, documentation, and shared libraries:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>make install</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Install the shared libraries:</para>
+    <para>Install the static libraries and headers:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>make install-libs</userinput></screen>
 

chapter06/kernfs.xml

@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ mknod -m 666 $LFS/dev/null c 1 3</userinput></screen>
       create a mirror of a directory or mount point to some other location. Use
       the following command to achieve this:</para>
 
-<screen><userinput>mount --bind /dev $LFS/dev</userinput></screen>
+<screen><userinput>mount -v --bind /dev $LFS/dev</userinput></screen>
 
   </sect2>
 

general.ent

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
-<!ENTITY version "SVN-20070220">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "February 20, 2007">
+<!ENTITY version "SVN-20070223">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "February 23, 2007">
 <!ENTITY milestone "6.3">
 <!ENTITY generic-version "development"> <!-- Use "development", "testing", or "x.y[-pre{x}]" -->