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Various minor text changes.

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Bruce Dubbs 16 年之前
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共有 6 個文件被更改,包括 14 次插入8 次删除
  1. 5 0
      chapter01/changelog.xml
  2. 3 3
      chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml
  3. 1 1
      chapter05/e2fsprogs.xml
  4. 1 1
      chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml
  5. 1 1
      chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml
  6. 3 2
      chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml

+ 5 - 0
chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -40,6 +40,11 @@
     <listitem>
     <listitem>
       <para>2009-05-23</para>
       <para>2009-05-23</para>
       <itemizedlist>
       <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[bdubbs] - Various minor text changes.  Thanks to Chris
+          Staub. Fixes
+          <ulink url="&lfs-ticket-root;2407">#2407</ulink>.</para>
+        </listitem>
         <listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>[bdubbs] - Change the bootsripts and udev configuration
           <para>[bdubbs] - Change the bootsripts and udev configuration
           so the rtc is set by udev upon boot. Removed aio device
           so the rtc is set by udev upon boot. Removed aio device

+ 3 - 3
chapter05/binutils-pass1.xml

@@ -77,9 +77,9 @@ cd ../binutils-build</userinput></screen>
         <listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>Because the machine description in the <envar>LFS_TGT</envar>
           <para>Because the machine description in the <envar>LFS_TGT</envar>
           variable is slightly different than the value returned by the
           variable is slightly different than the value returned by the
-          config.guess script, this switch will tell the configure script to
-          adjust Binutil's build system for building a cross linker.
-          </para>
+          <command>config.guess</command> script, this switch will tell the
+          <command>configure</command> script to adjust Binutil's build system
+          for building a cross linker.  </para>
         </listitem>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
       </varlistentry>
 
 

+ 1 - 1
chapter05/e2fsprogs.xml

@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ cd build</userinput></screen>
 <screen><userinput remap="install">make install-libs</userinput></screen>
 <screen><userinput remap="install">make install-libs</userinput></screen>
 
 
     <para>Make the installed static libraries writable so debugging symbols can 
     <para>Make the installed static libraries writable so debugging symbols can 
-    be removed later.</para>
+    be removed later:</para>
 
 
 <screen><userinput remap="install">chmod -v u+w \
 <screen><userinput remap="install">chmod -v u+w \
     /tools/lib/{libblkid,libcom_err,libe2p,libext2fs,libss,libuuid}.a</userinput></screen>
     /tools/lib/{libblkid,libcom_err,libe2p,libext2fs,libss,libuuid}.a</userinput></screen>

+ 1 - 1
chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml

@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
 
 
     <para>GCC now requires the GMP and MPFR packages. As these packages may
     <para>GCC now requires the GMP and MPFR packages. As these packages may
     not be included in your host distribution, they will be built with
     not be included in your host distribution, they will be built with
-    GCC.</para>
+    GCC:</para>
 
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">tar -jxf ../mpfr-&mpfr-version;.tar.bz2
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">tar -jxf ../mpfr-&mpfr-version;.tar.bz2
 mv mpfr-&mpfr-version; mpfr
 mv mpfr-&mpfr-version; mpfr

+ 1 - 1
chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml

@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ done</userinput></screen>
     changes to the original files in case the command is inadvertently run twice.
     changes to the original files in case the command is inadvertently run twice.
     </para>
     </para>
 
 
-    <para>On x86_64, unsetting the multlib spec for GCC ensures that it
+    <para>On x86_64, unsetting the multilib spec for GCC ensures that it
     won't attempt to link against libraries on the host:</para>
     won't attempt to link against libraries on the host:</para>
 
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">case $(uname -m) in
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">case $(uname -m) in

+ 3 - 2
chapter06/e2fsprogs.xml

@@ -25,8 +25,9 @@
 
 
     <para>The E2fsprogs package contains the utilities for handling the
     <para>The E2fsprogs package contains the utilities for handling the
     <systemitem class="filesystem">ext2</systemitem> file system. It also
     <systemitem class="filesystem">ext2</systemitem> file system. It also
-    supports the <systemitem class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem> journaling
-    file system.</para>
+    supports the <systemitem class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem> and 
+    <systemitem class="filesystem">ext4</systemitem> journaling
+    file systems.</para>
 
 
     <segmentedlist>
     <segmentedlist>
       <segtitle>&buildtime;</segtitle>
       <segtitle>&buildtime;</segtitle>