Minor edits from Bill and Alex P. Thanks guys.

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chapter05/binutils-pass1-inst.xml

@@ -8,9 +8,9 @@ because both Glibc and GCC perform various tests on the available linker and
 assembler to determine which of their own features to enable.</para>
 
 <note><para>Even though Binutils is an important toolchain package, we are not
-going to run the testsuite at this early stage. Firstly, the testsuite
-framework is not yet in place and secondly, the programs from this first pass
-will soon be overwritten by those installed in the second pass.</para></note>
+going to run the testsuite at this early stage. First, the testsuite framework
+is not yet in place and second, the programs from this first pass will soon be
+overwritten by those installed in the second pass.</para></note>
 
 <para>This package is known to behave badly when you have changed its default
 optimization flags (including the -march and -mcpu options). Therefore, if

chapter05/gcc-pass1-inst.xml

@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@
 for the moment.</para>
 
 <note><para>Even though GCC is an important toolchain package, we are not
-going to run the testsuite at this early stage. Firstly, the testsuite 
-framework is not yet in place and secondly, the programs from this first pass 
-will soon be overwritten by those installed in the second pass.</para></note>
+going to run the testsuite at this early stage. First, the testsuite framework
+is not yet in place and second, the programs from this first pass will soon be
+overwritten by those installed in the second pass.</para></note>
 
 <para>This package is known to behave badly when you have changed its
 default optimization flags (including the -march and -mcpu options).
@@ -36,8 +36,8 @@ cd ../gcc-build</userinput></screen></para>
 <listitem><para><userinput>--with-local-prefix=/tools</userinput>:  The
 purpose of this switch is to remove <filename>/usr/local/include</filename>
 from <userinput>gcc</userinput>'s include search path. This is not absolutely
-essential, but we want to try and minimize the influence from the host system,
-so this is a sensible thing to do.</para></listitem>
+essential; however, we want to try to minimize the influence of the host
+system, thus making this is a sensible thing to do.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para><userinput>--enable-shared</userinput>: This switch may
 seem counter-intuitive at first. But using it allows the building of