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Manuel Canales Esparcia 20 vuotta sitten
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      chapter06/hotplug.xml

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chapter06/hotplug.xml

@@ -54,7 +54,8 @@ that reason, remove the network hotplug agent:</para>
 
 
 <screen><userinput>touch /var/log/hotplug/events</userinput></screen>
 <screen><userinput>touch /var/log/hotplug/events</userinput></screen>
 
 
-<para>Create a directory for storing firmware that can be loaded by hotplug:</para>
+<para>Create a directory for storing firmware that can be loaded by 
+<command>hotplug</command>:</para>
 
 
 <screen><userinput>mkdir /lib/firmware</userinput></screen>
 <screen><userinput>mkdir /lib/firmware</userinput></screen>
 
 
@@ -83,7 +84,7 @@ that reason, remove the network hotplug agent:</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug"><primary
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug"><primary
 sortas="b-hotplug">hotplug</primary></indexterm>
 sortas="b-hotplug">hotplug</primary></indexterm>
 <para>This script is called by default by the Linux kernel when something
 <para>This script is called by default by the Linux kernel when something
-changes in its internal state (e.g., a new device is added or removed).</para>
+changes in its internal state (e.g., a new device is added or removed)</para>
 </listitem>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 </varlistentry>
 
 
@@ -97,7 +98,7 @@ hardware already present during system startup.  They are called by the
 <filename>hotplug</filename> initscript that comes from the LFS-Bootscripts
 <filename>hotplug</filename> initscript that comes from the LFS-Bootscripts
 package.  The <command>*.rc</command> scripts try to recover hotplug events that
 package.  The <command>*.rc</command> scripts try to recover hotplug events that
 were lost during system boot because, for example, the root filesystem was not
 were lost during system boot because, for example, the root filesystem was not
-mounted by the kernel.</para>
+mounted by the kernel</para>
 </listitem>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 </varlistentry>
 
 
@@ -109,8 +110,7 @@ sortas="d-/etc/hotplug/*.agent">/etc/hotplug/*.agent</primary></indexterm>
 <para>These scripts are called by <command>hotplug</command>
 <para>These scripts are called by <command>hotplug</command>
 in response to different types of hotplug events generated by the kernel.
 in response to different types of hotplug events generated by the kernel.
 Their action is to insert corresponding kernel modules and call any
 Their action is to insert corresponding kernel modules and call any
-user-provided scripts.
-</para>
+user-provided scripts</para>
 </listitem>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 </varlistentry>
 
 
@@ -120,8 +120,7 @@ user-provided scripts.
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-blacklist"><primary
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-blacklist"><primary
 sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/blacklist">/etc/hotplug/blacklist</primary></indexterm>
 sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/blacklist">/etc/hotplug/blacklist</primary></indexterm>
 <para>This file contains the list of modules that should never be inserted into
 <para>This file contains the list of modules that should never be inserted into
-the kernel by the hotplug scripts.
-</para>
+the kernel by the Hotplug scripts</para>
 </listitem>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 </varlistentry>
 
 
@@ -131,8 +130,7 @@ the kernel by the hotplug scripts.
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-functions"><primary
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-functions"><primary
 sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/hotplug.functions">/etc/hotplug/hotplug.functions</primary></indexterm>
 sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/hotplug.functions">/etc/hotplug/hotplug.functions</primary></indexterm>
 <para>This file contains common functions used by other scripts in the Hotplug
 <para>This file contains common functions used by other scripts in the Hotplug
-package.
-</para>
+package</para>
 </listitem>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 </varlistentry>
 
 
@@ -141,8 +139,7 @@ package.
 <listitem>
 <listitem>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-subdirs"><primary
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-subdirs"><primary
 sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/{pci,usb}">/etc/hotplug/{pci,usb}</primary></indexterm>
 sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/{pci,usb}">/etc/hotplug/{pci,usb}</primary></indexterm>
-<para>These directories contain user-written handlers for hotplug events.
-</para>
+<para>These directories contain user-written handlers for hotplug events</para>
 </listitem>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 </varlistentry>
 
 
@@ -152,8 +149,7 @@ sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/{pci,usb}">/etc/hotplug/{pci,usb}</primary></indexterm>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-usb.usermap"><primary
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-usb.usermap"><primary
 sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/usb.usermap">/etc/hotplug/usb.usermap</primary></indexterm>
 sortas="e-/etc/hotplug/usb.usermap">/etc/hotplug/usb.usermap</primary></indexterm>
 <para>This file contains rules that determine which user-defined handlers to
 <para>This file contains rules that determine which user-defined handlers to
-call for each USB device, based on its vendor ID and other attributes.
-</para>
+call for each USB device, based on its vendor ID and other attributes</para>
 </listitem>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 </varlistentry>
 
 
@@ -164,7 +160,7 @@ call for each USB device, based on its vendor ID and other attributes.
 sortas="e-/etc/hotplug.d">/etc/hotplug.d</primary></indexterm>
 sortas="e-/etc/hotplug.d">/etc/hotplug.d</primary></indexterm>
 <para>This directory contains programs (or symlinks to them) that are interested
 <para>This directory contains programs (or symlinks to them) that are interested
 in receiving hotplug events. For example, <application>Udev</application> puts
 in receiving hotplug events. For example, <application>Udev</application> puts
-its symlink here during installation.</para>
+its symlink here during installation</para>
 </listitem>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 </varlistentry>
 
 
@@ -174,7 +170,7 @@ its symlink here during installation.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-firmware"><primary
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-firmware"><primary
 sortas="e-/lib/firmware">/lib/firmware</primary></indexterm>
 sortas="e-/lib/firmware">/lib/firmware</primary></indexterm>
 <para>This directory contains the firmware for devices that need to have their
 <para>This directory contains the firmware for devices that need to have their
-firmware loaded before use.</para>
+firmware loaded before use</para>
 </listitem>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 </varlistentry>
 
 
@@ -183,8 +179,8 @@ firmware loaded before use.</para>
 <listitem>
 <listitem>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-events"><primary
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-hotplug hotplug-events"><primary
 sortas="e-/var/log/hotplug/events">/var/log/hotplug/events</primary></indexterm>
 sortas="e-/var/log/hotplug/events">/var/log/hotplug/events</primary></indexterm>
-<para>This file contains all the events that hotplug has called since bootup.
-</para>
+<para>This file contains all the events that <command>hotplug</command> has 
+called since bootup</para>
 </listitem>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 </varlistentry>