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chapter01/askforhelp.xml

@@ -44,20 +44,20 @@ problem.</para></note>
 </sect2>
 </sect2>
 
 
 <sect2>
 <sect2>
-<title>Configure Problems</title>
+<title>Configure Script Problems</title>
 
 
-<para>If something goes wrong during the stage where the configure
-script is run, review the <filename>config.log</filename> file. This
-file may contain errors encountered during configure which were not
-printed to the screen. Include those relevant lines if you need to ask
-for help.</para>
+<para>If something goes wrong during the stage where the
+<command>configure</command> script is run, review the
+<filename>config.log</filename> file. This file may contain errors encountered
+during <command>configure</command> which were not printed to the screen.
+Include those relevant lines if you need to ask for help.</para>
 </sect2>
 </sect2>
 
 
 <sect2>
 <sect2>
-<title>Compile Problems</title>
+<title>Compilation Problems</title>
 
 
 <para>Both the screen output and the contents of various files are
 <para>Both the screen output and the contents of various files are
-useful in determining the cause of compile issues. The screen output
+useful in determining the cause of compilation issues. The screen output
 from the <command>./configure</command> script and the 
 from the <command>./configure</command> script and the 
 <command>make</command> run can be helpful. It
 <command>make</command> run can be helpful. It
 is not necessary to include the entire output, but do include enough
 is not necessary to include the entire output, but do include enough

+ 3 - 0
chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -107,6 +107,9 @@ First a summary, then a detailed log.</para>
 </itemizedlist>
 </itemizedlist>
 </listitem>
 </listitem>
 
 
+<listitem><para>July  6th, 2005 [matt]: Several typo corrections, as suggested
+by Bernard Leak.</para></listitem>
+
 <listitem><para>July  6th, 2005 [archaic]: Pulled the inetutils kernel header
 <listitem><para>July  6th, 2005 [archaic]: Pulled the inetutils kernel header
 patch out again as it is not needed.</para></listitem>
 patch out again as it is not needed.</para></listitem>
 
 

+ 1 - 1
chapter03/introduction.xml

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ and stabilized in the development version of the book.</para>
 location has changed since this book was published, Google (<ulink
 location has changed since this book was published, Google (<ulink
 url="http://www.google.com/"/>) provides a useful search engine for
 url="http://www.google.com/"/>) provides a useful search engine for
 most packages. If this search is unsuccessful, try one of the
 most packages. If this search is unsuccessful, try one of the
-alternate means of downloading discussed at <ulink
+alternative means of downloading discussed at <ulink
 url="&lfs-root;lfs/packages.html"/>.</para>
 url="&lfs-root;lfs/packages.html"/>.</para>
 
 
 <para>Downloaded packages and patches will need to be stored somewhere
 <para>Downloaded packages and patches will need to be stored somewhere

+ 3 - 3
chapter03/packages.xml

@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@
 <note><para>File (&file-version;) may no longer be available at the
 <note><para>File (&file-version;) may no longer be available at the
 listed location. The site administrators of the master download
 listed location. The site administrators of the master download
 location occasionally remove older versions when new ones are
 location occasionally remove older versions when new ones are
-released. An alternate download location that may have the correct
+released. An alternative download location that may have the correct
 version available is <ulink
 version available is <ulink
 url="ftp://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org/pub/lfs/"/>.</para></note>
 url="ftp://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org/pub/lfs/"/>.</para></note>
 </listitem>
 </listitem>
@@ -345,8 +345,8 @@ url="ftp://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org/pub/lfs/"/>.</para></note>
 <para><ulink url="ftp://ftp.pld.org.pl/software/shadow/"/></para>
 <para><ulink url="ftp://ftp.pld.org.pl/software/shadow/"/></para>
 <note><para>Shadow (&shadow-version;) may no longer be available at the listed
 <note><para>Shadow (&shadow-version;) may no longer be available at the listed
 location. The site administrators of the master download location occasionally
 location. The site administrators of the master download location occasionally
-remove older versions when new ones are released. An alternate download location
-that may have the correct version available is <ulink
+remove older versions when new ones are released. An alternative download
+location that may have the correct version available is <ulink
 url="ftp://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org/pub/lfs/"/>.</para></note>
 url="ftp://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org/pub/lfs/"/>.</para></note>
 </listitem>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 </varlistentry>

+ 1 - 1
chapter06/udev.xml

@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ the configuration files here:</para>
 
 
 <!-- Edit Me -->
 <!-- Edit Me -->
 <para>Run the <command>udevstart</command> program to create our full
 <para>Run the <command>udevstart</command> program to create our full
-compliment of device nodes.</para>
+complement of device nodes.</para>
 
 
 <screen><userinput>/sbin/udevstart</userinput></screen>
 <screen><userinput>/sbin/udevstart</userinput></screen>
 
 

+ 1 - 1
chapter07/introduction.xml

@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/hints/downloads/files/bsd-init.txt"/>.
 Searching the LFS mailing lists for <quote>depinit</quote> will also offer
 Searching the LFS mailing lists for <quote>depinit</quote> will also offer
 additional choices.</para>
 additional choices.</para>
 
 
-<para>If using an alternate style of init scripts, skip this chapter
+<para>If using an alternative style of init scripts, skip this chapter
 and move on to <xref linkend="chapter-bootable"/>.</para>
 and move on to <xref linkend="chapter-bootable"/>.</para>
 
 
 </sect1>
 </sect1>

+ 1 - 1
prologue/audience.xml

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="audience.html"?>
 <?dbhtml filename="audience.html"?>
 
 
 <para>There are many reasons why somebody would want to read this
 <para>There are many reasons why somebody would want to read this
-book. The principle reason is to install a Linux system
+book. The principal reason is to install a Linux system
 from the source code. A question many people raise is, <quote>why go
 from the source code. A question many people raise is, <quote>why go
 through all the hassle of manually building a Linux system from
 through all the hassle of manually building a Linux system from
 scratch when you can just download and install an existing
 scratch when you can just download and install an existing

+ 1 - 1
prologue/foreword.xml

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="foreword.html"?>
 <?dbhtml filename="foreword.html"?>
 
 
 <para>My adventures in Linux began in 1998 when I downloaded and
 <para>My adventures in Linux began in 1998 when I downloaded and
-installed my first distribution. After working with it for awhile, I
+installed my first distribution. After working with it for a while, I
 discovered issues I definitely would have liked to see improved upon.
 discovered issues I definitely would have liked to see improved upon.
 For example, I didn't like the arrangement of the bootscripts or the way
 For example, I didn't like the arrangement of the bootscripts or the way
 programs were configured by default. I tried a number of alternative
 programs were configured by default. I tried a number of alternative

+ 1 - 1
prologue/typography.xml

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ referenced.</para>
 
 
 <screen><computeroutput>install-info: unknown option '--dir-file=/mnt/lfs/usr/info/dir'</computeroutput></screen>
 <screen><computeroutput>install-info: unknown option '--dir-file=/mnt/lfs/usr/info/dir'</computeroutput></screen>
 
 
-<para>This form of text (fixed width text) shows screen output,
+<para>This form of text (fixed-width text) shows screen output,
 probably as the result of commands issued.  This format is also used
 probably as the result of commands issued.  This format is also used
 to show filenames, such as
 to show filenames, such as
 <filename>/etc/ld.so.conf</filename>.</para>
 <filename>/etc/ld.so.conf</filename>.</para>