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Gerard Beekmans 24 yıl önce
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      chapter05/kernel-exp.xml
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      chapter05/kernel-inst.xml

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chapter05/kernel-exp.xml

@@ -30,9 +30,7 @@ needing later on.
 <userinput>cp -R ../src/linux/include/linux .</userinput> and
 <userinput>cp -R ../src/linux/include/linux .</userinput> and
 <userinput>mkdir asm &amp;&amp; cp -a ../src/linux/include/asm/* .</userinput>:
 <userinput>mkdir asm &amp;&amp; cp -a ../src/linux/include/asm/* .</userinput>:
 These commands copy the kernel headers in the 
 These commands copy the kernel headers in the 
-<filename>$LFS/usr/include</filename> directory. For details on why we don't 
-link to these directories (anymore), and instead copy them, please refer to the 
-<filename>README</filename> file in the kernel source.
+<filename>$LFS/usr/include</filename> directory.
 </para>
 </para>
 
 
 </sect2>
 </sect2>

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chapter05/kernel-inst.xml

@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 <sect2>
 <sect2>
-<title>Installation of Linux Kernel</title>
+<title>Installation of the Linux Kernel</title>
 
 
 <para>
 <para>
 We won't be compiling a new kernel image yet. We'll do that after we
 We won't be compiling a new kernel image yet. We'll do that after we
 have finished the installation of the basic system software in this
 have finished the installation of the basic system software in this
-chapter. But because certain software need the kernel header files, we're
+chapter. But because certain software needs the kernel header files, we're
 going to unpack the kernel archive now and set it up so that we can
 going to unpack the kernel archive now and set it up so that we can
-compile package that need the kernel.
+compile the packages that need the kernel.
 </para>
 </para>
 
 
 <para>
 <para>