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Matthew Burgess 20 년 전
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      chapter01/askforhelp.xml

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chapter01/askforhelp.xml

@@ -46,18 +46,18 @@ problem.</para></note>
 <sect2>
 <title>Configure Script Problems</title>
 
-<para>If something goes wrong during the stage where the
-<command>configure</command> script is run, review the
-<filename>config.log</filename> file. This file may contain errors encountered
-during <command>configure</command> which were not printed to the screen.
-Include those relevant lines if you need to ask for help.</para>
+<para>If something goes wrong while running the <command>configure</command>
+script is run, review the <filename>config.log</filename> file. This file may
+contain errors encountered during <command>configure</command> which were not
+printed to the screen.  Include those <emphasis>relevant</emphasis> lines if you
+need to ask for help.</para>
 </sect2>
 
 <sect2>
 <title>Compilation Problems</title>
 
 <para>Both the screen output and the contents of various files are
-useful in determining the cause of compilation issues. The screen output
+useful in determining the cause of compilation problems. The screen output
 from the <command>./configure</command> script and the 
 <command>make</command> run can be helpful. It
 is not necessary to include the entire output, but do include enough