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@@ -28,13 +28,13 @@ to show filenames, such as
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<para><emphasis>Emphasis</emphasis></para>
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-<para>This form of text is used for several purposes in the book,
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-mainly to emphasize important points or items.</para>
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+<para>This form of text is used for several purposes in the book. Its main
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+purpose is to emphasize important points or items.</para>
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<para><ulink url="&lfs-root;"/></para>
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-<para>This format is used for hyperlinks, both within the LFS
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-community and to external pages, including HOWTOs, download locations,
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+<para>This format is used for hyperlinks both within the LFS
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+community and to external pages. It includes HOWTOs, download locations,
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and websites.</para>
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<screen><userinput>cat > $LFS/etc/group << "EOF"
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@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ Therefore, this entire section is generally typed as seen.</para>
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<para><replaceable>[REPLACED TEXT]</replaceable></para>
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<para>This format is used to encapsulate text that is not to be typed
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-as seen or copy-and-pasted.</para>
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+as seen or copied-and-pasted.</para>
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<para><filename>passwd(5)</filename></para>
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