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      appendixa/autoconf-desc.xml
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      appendixa/automake-desc.xml
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      appendixa/bash-desc.xml
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      appendixa/bin86-desc.xml
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      appendixa/binutils-desc.xml
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      appendixa/bison-desc.xml
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      appendixa/bzip2-desc.xml
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      appendixa/diffutils-desc.xml
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      appendixa/e2fsprogs-desc.xml
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      appendixa/ed-desc.xml
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      appendixa/file-desc.xml
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      appendixa/fileutils-desc.xml
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      appendixa/findutils-desc.xml
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      appendixa/flex-desc.xml
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      appendixa/gawk-desc.xml
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      appendixa/gcc-desc.xml
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      appendixa/gettext-desc.xml
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      appendixa/glibc-desc.xml
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      appendixa/grep-desc.xml
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      appendixa/groff-desc.xml
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      appendixa/gzip-desc.xml
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      appendixa/kbd-desc.xml
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      appendixa/kernel-desc.xml
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      appendixa/less-desc.xml
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      appendixa/libtool-desc.xml
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      appendixa/lilo-desc.xml
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      appendixa/m4-desc.xml
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      appendixa/make-desc.xml
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      appendixa/man-desc.xml
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      appendixa/manpages-desc.xml
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      appendixa/modutils-desc.xml
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      appendixa/ncurses-desc.xml
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      appendixa/netkitbase-desc.xml
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      appendixa/nettools-desc.xml
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      appendixa/patch-desc.xml
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      appendixa/perl-desc.xml
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      appendixa/procinfo-desc.xml
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      appendixa/procps-desc.xml
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      appendixa/psmisc-desc.xml
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      appendixa/reiserfs-desc.xml
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      appendixa/sed-desc.xml
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      appendixa/shadowpwd-desc.xml
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      appendixa/shellutils-desc.xml
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      appendixa/sysklogd-desc.xml
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      appendixa/sysvinit-desc.xml
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      appendixa/tar-desc.xml
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      appendixa/texinfo-desc.xml
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      appendixa/textutils-desc.xml
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      appendixa/utillinux-desc.xml
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      appendixa/vim-desc.xml
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      chapter05/binutils-exp.xml
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      chapter05/binutils-inst.xml
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      chapter05/fileutils-inst.xml
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      chapter05/gcc-inst.xml
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      chapter05/kernel.xml
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      chapter06/binutils-inst.xml
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      chapter06/gcc-inst.xml
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      chapter06/glibc-inst.xml
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appendixa/autoconf-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of autoconf-&autoconf-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Autoconf-&autoconf-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>autoconf, autoheader, autoreconf, autoscan, autoupdate and 

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/automake-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of automake-&automake-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Automake-&automake-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>aclocal and automake</para></sect3>

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/bash-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of bash-&bash-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Bash-&bash-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>bash, sh (link to bash) and bashbug</para></sect3>

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/bin86-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of bin86-&bin86-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Bin86-&bin86-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>as86, as86_encap, ld86, nm86 (link to objdump86), objdump86 and

+ 1 - 2
appendixa/binutils-desc.xml

@@ -1,5 +1,4 @@
-<sect2>
-<title>Contents of binutils-&binutils-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Binutils-&binutils-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 

+ 1 - 2
appendixa/bison-desc.xml

@@ -1,5 +1,4 @@
-<sect2>
-<title>Contents of bison-&bison-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Bison-&bison-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/bzip2-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of bzip2-&bzip2-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Bzip2-&bzip2-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>bunzip2 (link to bzip2), bzcat (link to bzip2), bzip2 and

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/diffutils-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of diffutils-&diffutils-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Diffutils-&diffutils-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>cmp, diff, diff3 and sdiff</para></sect3>

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/e2fsprogs-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of e2fsprogs-&e2fsprogs-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of E2fsprogs-&e2fsprogs-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/ed-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of ed-&ed-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Ed-&ed-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>ed and red (link to ed)</para></sect3>

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/file-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of file-&file-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of File-&file-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>file</para></sect3>

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/fileutils-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of fileutils-&fileutils-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Fileutils-&fileutils-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>chgrp, chmod, chown, cp, dd, df, dir, dircolors, du, install, ln, 

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/findutils-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of findutils-&findutils-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Findutils-&findutils-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>bigram, code, find, frcode, locate, updatedb and

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/flex-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of flex-&flex-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Flex-&flex-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>flex, flex++ (link to flex) and lex</para></sect3>

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/gawk-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of gawk-&gawk-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Gawk-&gawk-contversion;</title>
 
 <para>Not yet checked</para>
 

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/gcc-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of gcc-&gcc-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of GCC-&gcc-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>c++, c++filt, cc (link to gcc), cc1, cc1plus, collect2, cpp, cpp0,

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/gettext-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of gettext-&gettext-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Gettext-&gettext-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>gettext, gettextize, msgcmp, msgcomm, msgfmt, msgmerge, msgunfmt,

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/glibc-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of glibc-&glibc-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Glibc-&glibc-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/grep-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of grep-&grep-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Grep-&grep-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>egrep, fgrep and grep</para></sect3>

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/groff-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of groff-&groff-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Groff-&groff-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>addftinfo, afmtodit, eqn, grn, grodvi, groff, grog, grolbp, grolj4, 

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/gzip-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of gzip-&gzip-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Gzip-&gzip-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>gunzip (link to gzip), gzexe, gzip,

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/kbd-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of kbd-&kbd-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Kbd-&kbd-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>chvt, deallocvt, dumpkeys, fgconsole, 

+ 2 - 2
appendixa/kernel-desc.xml

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of kernel-&kernel-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Linux-&kernel-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Support Files</title>
-<para>the linux kernel and the linux kernel headers</para></sect3>
+<para>The linux kernel and the linux kernel headers</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>Descriptions</title>
 

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/less-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of less-&less-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Less-&less-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>less, lessecho and lesskey</para></sect3>

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/libtool-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of libtool-&libtool-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Libtool-&libtool-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>libtool and libtoolize</para></sect3>

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/lilo-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of lilo-&lilo-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Lilo-&lilo-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>lilo and mkrescue</para></sect3>

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/m4-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of m4-&m4-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of M4-&m4-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>m4</para></sect3>

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/make-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of make-&make-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Make-&make-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program files</title>
 <para>make</para></sect3>

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/man-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of man-&man-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Man-&man-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>apropos, makewhatis, man, man2dvi, man2html and

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/manpages-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of manpages-&man-pages-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Man-pages-&man-pages-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Support Files</title>
 <para>various manual pages that don't come with the

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/modutils-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of modutils-&modutils-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Modutils-&modutils-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>depmod, genksyms, insmod, insmod_ksymoops_clean, kallsyms (link to

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/ncurses-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Ncurses-&ncurses-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>captoinfo (link to tic), clear, infocmp, infotocap (link to tic),

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/netkitbase-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of netkit-base-&netkit-base-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Netkit-base-&netkit-base-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>inetd and ping</para></sect3>

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/nettools-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of net-tools-&net-tools-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Net-tools-&net-tools-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/patch-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of patch-&patch-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Patch-&patch-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>patch</para></sect3>

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/perl-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of perl-&perl-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Perl-&perl-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>a2p, c2ph, dprofpp, find2perl, h2ph, h2xs, perl, perl5.6.1,

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/procinfo-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of procinfo-&procinfo-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Procinfo-&procinfo-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>lsdev, procinfo and socklist</para></sect3>

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/procps-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of procps-&procps-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Procps-&procps-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>free, kill, oldps, pgrep, pkill, ps, skill, snice, sysctl, tload, top, 

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/psmisc-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of psmisc-&psmisc-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Psmisc-&psmisc-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>fuser, killall, pidof (link to killall) and pstree</para>

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/reiserfs-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of reiserfsprogs-&reiserfs-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Reiserfsprogs-&reiserfs-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>debugreiserfs, mkreiserfs, reiserfsck, resize_reiserfs and

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/sed-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of sed-&sed-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Sed-&sed-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>sed</para></sect3>

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/shadowpwd-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of shadow-&shadow-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Shadow-&shadow-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>chage, chfn, chpasswd, chsh, dpasswd, expiry, faillog, gpasswd, 

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/shellutils-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of sh-utils-&sh-utils-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Sh-utils-&sh-utils-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>basename, chroot, date, dirname,

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/sysklogd-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of sysklogd-&sysklogd-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Sysklogd-&sysklogd-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>klogd and syslogd</para></sect3>

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/sysvinit-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of sysvinit-&sysvinit-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Sysvinit-&sysvinit-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>halt, init, killall5, last, lastb (link to last), mesg, pidof

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/tar-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of tar-&tar-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Tar-&tar-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>rmt and tar</para></sect3>

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/texinfo-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of texinfo-&texinfo-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Texinfo-&texinfo-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>info, install-info, makeinfo, texi2dvi and texindex</para></sect3>

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/textutils-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of textutils-&textutils-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Textutils-&textutils-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>cat, cksum, comm, csplit, cut, expand,

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/utillinux-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents of util-linux-&util-linux-contversion;</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Util-linux-&util-linux-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>agetty, arch, blockdev, cal, cfdisk, chkdupexe, col, colcrt, 

+ 1 - 1
appendixa/vim-desc.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<sect2><title>Contents</title>
+<sect2><title>Contents of Vim-&vim-contversion;</title>
 
 <sect3><title>Program Files</title>
 <para>ex (link to vim), rview (link to vim), rvim (link to vim), vi

+ 1 - 1
chapter05/binutils-exp.xml

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 <title>Command explanations</title>
 
 <para><userinput>mkdir ../binutils-build:</userinput> The installation
-instructions for Binutils recommend creating a seperate build directory
+instructions for Binutils recommend creating a separate build directory
 instead of compiling the package inside the source tree. So, we create a
 binutils-build directory and work from there.</para>
 

+ 5 - 4
chapter05/binutils-inst.xml

@@ -2,10 +2,11 @@
 <title>Installation of Binutils</title>
 
 <para>This package is known to behave badly when you have changed its default
-optimization flags (including the -march and -mcpu options). Binutils is 
-best left alone, so we recommend you unsetting CFLAGS, CXXFLAGS and other
-such variables/settings that would change the default optimization that
-it comes with.</para>
+optimization flags (including the -march and -mcpu options). Binutils is
+best left alone.  Therefore, if you have defined any environment variables
+that override default optimizations, such as CFLAGS and CXXFLAGS, we
+recommend unsetting or modifying them when building binutils.  You have been
+warned.</para>
 
 <para>Install Binutils by running the following commands:</para>
 

+ 3 - 3
chapter05/fileutils-inst.xml

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <sect2>
 <title>Installation of Fileutils</title>
 
-<para>The programs from a statically linked fileutils package may cause
+<para>The programs from a statically linked Fileutils package may cause
 segmentation faults on certain systems, if your distribution has
 Glibc-2.2.3 or higher installed. It also seems to happen mostly on machines
 powered by an AMD CPU, but there is a case or two where an Intel system
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ sed -e 's/\(.*\)\(fopen-safer\.c \)\\/\1\2atexit.c \\/' \
 &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;-e 's/\(.*\)\(idcache\$U\.\$.*\)\\/\1\2atexit$U.$(OBJEXT) \\/' \
 &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;lib/Makefile.in.backup &gt; lib/Makefile.in</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>Install fileutils by running the following commands:</para>
+<para>Install Fileutils by running the following commands:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>./configure --disable-nls \
 &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;--prefix=$LFS/usr --bindir=$LFS/bin &amp;&amp;
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ make install &amp;&amp;
 cd $LFS/usr/bin &amp;&amp;
 ln -sf ../../bin/install</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>Once you have installed fileutils, you can test whether the
+<para>Once you have installed Fileutils, you can test whether the
 segmentation fault problem has been avoided by running
 <userinput>$LFS/bin/ls</userinput>. If this works, then you are OK. If
 not, then you need to re-do the installation using the sed commands if 

+ 6 - 5
chapter05/gcc-inst.xml

@@ -1,11 +1,12 @@
 <sect2>
 <title>Installation of GCC</title>
 
-<para>This package is known to behave badly when you have changed its default
-optimization flags (including the -march and -mcpu options). GCC is best
-left alone, so we recommend you unsetting CFLAGS, CXXFLAGS and other
-such variables/settings that would change the default optimization that
-it comes with.</para>
+<para>This package is known to behave badly when you have changed its
+default optimization flags (including the -march and -mcpu options). GCC is
+best left alone.  Therefore, if you have defined any environment variables
+that override default optimizations, such as CFLAGS and CXXFLAGS, we
+recommend unsetting or modifying them when building binutils.  You have
+been warned.</para>
 
 <para>Install GCC by running the following commands:</para>
 

+ 1 - 1
chapter05/kernel.xml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <sect1 id="ch05-kernel">
-<title>Installing Linux Kernel-&kernel-version;</title>
+<title>Installing Linux-&kernel-version;</title>
 <?dbhtml filename="kernel.html" dir="chapter05"?>
 
 <screen>Estimated build time:           &kernel-time-static;

+ 5 - 5
chapter06/binutils-inst.xml

@@ -1,14 +1,14 @@
 <sect2><title>Installation of Binutils</title>
 
 <para>This package is known to behave badly when you have changed its
-default optimization flags (including the -march and -mcpu options). Binutils 
-is best left alone, so we recommend you unsetting CFLAGS, CXXFLAGS and other
-such variables/settings that would change the default optimization that
-it comes with.</para>
+default optimization flags (including the -march and -mcpu options). Binutils
+is best left alone.  Therefore, if you have defined any environment variables
+that override default optimizations, such as CFLAGS and CXXFLAGS, we
+recommend unsetting or modifying them when building binutils.  You have
+been warned.</para>
 
 <para>Install Binutils by running the following commands:</para>
 
-
 <para><screen><userinput>mkdir ../binutils-build &amp;&amp;
 cd ../binutils-build &amp;&amp;
 ../binutils-&binutils-version;/configure --prefix=/usr --enable-shared &amp;&amp;

+ 6 - 5
chapter06/gcc-inst.xml

@@ -1,11 +1,12 @@
 <sect2>
 <title>Installation of GCC</title>
 
-<para>This package is known to behave badly when you have changed its default
-optimization flags (including the -march and -mcpu options). GCC is best
-left alone, so we recommend you unsetting CFLAGS, CXXFLAGS and other
-such variables/settings that would change the default optimization that
-it comes with.</para>
+<para>This package is known to behave badly when you have changed its
+default optimization flags (including the -march and -mcpu options). GCC is
+best left alone.  Therefore, if you have defined any environment variables
+that override default optimizations, such as CFLAGS and CXXFLAGS, we
+recommend unsetting or modifying them when building binutils.  You have
+been warned.</para>
 
 <para>Install GCC by running the following commands. These commands will build
 the C and C++ compiler. Other compilers are available within the gcc

+ 8 - 5
chapter06/glibc-inst.xml

@@ -6,11 +6,14 @@ glibc-&glibc-version; directory and unpack glibc-linuxthreads inside
 the glibc-&glibc-version; directory, not in /usr/src as you normally
 would do.</para>
 
-<para>This package is known to behave badly when you have changed its default
-optimization flags (including the -march and -mcpu options). Glibc is 
-best left alone, so we recommend you unsetting CFLAGS, CXXFLAGS and other
-such variables/settings that would change the default optimization that
-it comes with. Also, don't pass the --enable-kernel option to the configure
+<para>This package is known to behave badly when you have changed its
+default optimization flags (including the -march and -mcpu options). Glibc
+is best left alone.  Therefore, if you have defined any environment variables
+that override default optimizations, such as CFLAGS and CXXFLAGS, we
+recommend unsetting or modifying them when building binutils.  You have
+been warned.</para>
+
+<para>Also, don't pass the --enable-kernel option to the configure
 script. It's known to cause segmentation faults when other packages like
 fileutils, make and tar are linked against it.</para>
 

+ 3 - 3
chapter06/psmisc-inst.xml

@@ -7,15 +7,15 @@
 make &amp;&amp;
 make install</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>psmisc installs the
-<filename>/usr/share/man/man1/pidof.1</filename> man page, but psmisc's
+<para>Psmisc installs the
+<filename>/usr/share/man/man1/pidof.1</filename> man page, but Psmisc's
 pidof program isn't installed by default. Generally that isn't a problem
 because we install the sysvinit package later on which provides us with
 a better pidof program.</para>
 
 <para>It's up to you now to decide if you are going to use the sysvinit 
 package which provides a pidof program, or not. If you are going to, you 
-should remove psmisc's pidof man page by running:</para>
+should remove Psmisc's pidof man page by running:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>rm /usr/share/man/man1/pidof.1</userinput></screen></para>
 

+ 1 - 1
chapter08/kernel.xml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <sect1 id="ch08-kernel">
-<title>Installing linux-&kernel-version;</title>
+<title>Installing Linux-&kernel-version;</title>
 <?dbhtml filename="kernel.html" dir="chapter08"?>
 
 <screen>Estimated build time:           &kernel-time;