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More typo fixes (Anderson Lizardo)

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Matthew Burgess 21 年 前
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  1. 10 6
      chapter05/adjusting.xml

+ 10 - 6
chapter05/adjusting.xml

@@ -9,14 +9,14 @@
 
 <para>Now that the temporary C libraries have been installed, all
 the tools compiled in the rest of this chapter should be linked against these
-libraries. In order to accomplish this the linker, and the compiler's
+libraries. In order to accomplish this, the linker and the compiler's
 specs file, need to be adjsted.</para>
 
 <para> Some people would say that there is <emphasis><quote>black magic juju
 below this line</quote></emphasis>, but it is really very simple.</para>
 
-<para>First the adjusted linker is installed (adjusted at the end of the first pass
-of Binutils), by running the following command from within
+<para>First, the linker, adjusted at the end of the first pass of Binutils, is
+installed by running the following command from within
 the <filename class="directory">binutils-build</filename> directory:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>make -C ld install</userinput></screen>
@@ -45,7 +45,11 @@ sed 's@ /lib/ld-linux.so.2@ /tools/lib/ld-linux.so.2@g' \
 mv -f tempspecfile $SPECFILE &amp;&amp;
 unset SPECFILE</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>It is recommended that the above command be cut-and-pasted in order to ensure correctness - Alternatively the specs file can be edited by hand. This is done simply by replacing every occurrence of <quote>/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote> with <quote>/tools/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote>.</para>
+<para>It is recommended that the above command be cut-and-pasted in order to
+ensure correctness - Alternatively, the specs file can be edited by hand. This
+is done simply by replacing every occurrence of
+<quote>/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote> with <quote>/tools/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote>.
+</para>
 
 <para> Be sure to visually inspect the specs file in order to verify the intended changes have been made.</para>
 
@@ -66,7 +70,7 @@ Run the following commands to eliminate this possibility:</para>
 
 <caution><para>It is imperative at this point to stop and ensure that the basic
 functions (compiling and linking) of the new toolchain are working as expected.
-To perform a simple sanity check run the following commands:</para>
+To perform a simple sanity check, run the following commands:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>echo 'main(){}' &gt; dummy.c
 cc dummy.c
@@ -85,7 +89,7 @@ as shown above, or there was no output at all, then something is seriously
 wrong. You will need to investigate and retrace your steps to find out where the
 problem is and correct it. There is no point in continuing until this is done.
 First, perform the sanity check again, using <command>gcc</command> instead of
-<command>cc</command>. If this works then the
+<command>cc</command>. If this works, then the
 <filename class="symlink">/tools/bin/cc</filename> symlink is missing. Revisit
 <xref linkend="ch-tools-gcc-pass1"/> and install the symlink. Second, ensure your PATH
 is correct. You can check this by running <userinput>echo $PATH</userinput> and