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* Minor wording/typo fixes (merge of r4975 and r4976 from trunk)

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/6.1/BOOK@4977 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
Matthew Burgess 20 년 전
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chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -82,6 +82,9 @@ first a summary, then a detailed log.</para>
 </itemizedlist>
 </itemizedlist>
 </listitem>
 </listitem>
 
 
+<listitem><para>April 16, 2005 [matt]: Minor wording/typo fixes (Allard Welter)
+</para></listitem>
+
 <listitem><para>April 16, 2005 [matt]: Minor wording/typo fixes (Peter Ennis)
 <listitem><para>April 16, 2005 [matt]: Minor wording/typo fixes (Peter Ennis)
 </para></listitem>
 </para></listitem>
 
 

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chapter07/udev.xml

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ created each time the system boots, they will be stored on a
 <systemitem class="filesystem">ramfs</systemitem> (a file system that
 <systemitem class="filesystem">ramfs</systemitem> (a file system that
 resides entirely in memory and does not take up any disk space).
 resides entirely in memory and does not take up any disk space).
 Device nodes do not require much disk space, so the memory that is
 Device nodes do not require much disk space, so the memory that is
-used in negligable.</para>
+used is negligible.</para>
 
 
 <sect2>
 <sect2>
 <title>History</title>
 <title>History</title>
@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@ immediately accessible.</para>
 <sect2>
 <sect2>
 <title>Handling Hotpluggable/Dynamic Devices</title>
 <title>Handling Hotpluggable/Dynamic Devices</title>
 
 
-<para>When you plug in a device, such a Universal Serial Bus (USB) MP3 player, the kernel
+<para>When you plug in a device, such as a Universal Serial Bus (USB) MP3 player, the kernel
 recognizes that the device is now connected and generates a hotplug
 recognizes that the device is now connected and generates a hotplug
 event. If the driver is already loaded (either because it was compiled
 event. If the driver is already loaded (either because it was compiled
 into the kernel or because it was loaded via the
 into the kernel or because it was loaded via the