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Fix typo and clarify text for Ch. 6 perl

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Dan Nichilson 18 gadi atpakaļ
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3 mainītis faili ar 15 papildinājumiem un 5 dzēšanām
  1. 10 0
      chapter01/changelog.xml
  2. 3 3
      chapter06/perl.xml
  3. 2 2
      general.ent

+ 10 - 0
chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -36,6 +36,16 @@
     </listitem>
 -->
 
+    <listitem>
+      <para>2007-08-06</para>
+      <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[dnicholson] - Fixed a typo and clarified text on the Perl
+          page. Reported by Shawn.</para>
+        </listitem>
+      </itemizedlist>
+    </listitem>
+
     <listitem>
       <para>2007-07-31</para>
       <itemizedlist>

+ 3 - 3
chapter06/perl.xml

@@ -35,9 +35,9 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of Perl</title>
 
-    <para>First create a basic <filename>/etc/hosts</filename> file which will be
-    referenced in one of Perl's configuration files as well as being used used by
-    the testsuite if you run that:</para>
+    <para>First create a basic <filename>/etc/hosts</filename> file to be
+    referenced in one of Perl's configuration files as well as the optional
+    testsuite:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>echo "127.0.0.1 localhost $(hostname)" &gt; /etc/hosts</userinput></screen>
 

+ 2 - 2
general.ent

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
-<!ENTITY version "SVN-20070731">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "July 31, 2007">
+<!ENTITY version "SVN-20070806">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "August 6, 2007">
 <!ENTITY milestone "7.0">
 <!ENTITY generic-version "development"> <!-- Use "development", "testing", or "x.y[-pre{x}]" -->