Grammar fixes.

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chapter03/creatingdirs.xml

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 
 <para>
 Let's create the directory tree on the LFS partition according to the FHS
-standard which can be found at <ulink
+standard, which can be found at <ulink
 url="http://www.pathname.com/fhs/">http://www.pathname.com/fhs/</ulink>.
 Issuing the following commands will create the necessary directories:
 </para>
@@ -35,17 +35,17 @@ Issuing the following commands will create the necessary directories:
 </literallayout></blockquote>
 
 <para>
-Normally directories are created with permission mode 755, which isn't
-desired for all directories. I haven't checked the FHS if they suggest
+Normally, directories are created with permission mode 755, which isn't
+desired for all directories. I haven't checked if the FHS suggests
 default modes for certain directories, so I'll just change the modes for
 a few directories that make sense to change. The first change is a mode 
 0750 for the $LFS/root directory. This is to make sure that not just 
 everybody can enter the /root directory (the same a user would do with 
 /home/username directories). The second change is a mode 1777 for the tmp 
-directories. This way every user can write stuff to the /tmp directory if 
-they need to. The sticky (1) bit makes sure users can't delete other 
-user's file which they normally can do  because the directory is set in 
-such a way that every body (owner, group, world) can write to that directory.
+directories. This way, any user can write stuff to the /tmp directory when
+needed. The sticky (1) bit makes sure users can't delete other 
+users' files which they normally can do, because the directory is set in 
+such a way that everybody (owner, group, world) can write to that directory.
 </para>
 
 <blockquote><literallayout>
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ such a way that every body (owner, group, world) can write to that directory.
 <para>
 Now that the directories are created, copy the source files that were
 downloaded in chapter 3 to some subdirectory under $LFS/usr/src (this 
-directory needs to be created yet).
+directory still needs to be created yet).
 </para>
 
 </sect1>

chapter03/creatingfs.xml

@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ Once the partition is created, we have to create a new file system on
 that partition. To create an ext2 file system, the mke2fs command is the
 correct choice. To create a reiser file system, the mkreiserfs command
 should be used. To create a different kind of file system, the
-appropriate command needs to be executed. The new partition used
+appropriate command needs to be executed. The new partition is used
 as the only option to the
-command and the file system will be created. If the partition is hda2
+command and the file system is created. If the partition is hda2
 and ext2 is to be created, the user would run:
 </para>