Corrected problems pointed out on the lists

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chapter08/grub.xml

@@ -9,24 +9,24 @@ we need to ensure we can boot it.  To do this, we will run the grub program.</pa
 
 <para>Grub uses it's own naming structure for drives, in the form of hd(a,b),
 where a is the hard drive number, and b is the partition number, both of which
-start from zero.  So, partition hda1 would be hd(0,0) to grub, and hdb2 would
-be hd(1,2).  Also, Grub doesn't pay attention to CDROM drives at all, so if,
-for example, if you have a CD on hdb, and a second hard drive on hdc, partitions
-on that second hard drive would still be hd(1,b).</para>
+start from zero.  So, partition hda1 would be (hd0,0) to grub, and hdb2 would
+be (hd1,1).  Also, Grub doesn't pay attention to CDROM drives at all, so if,
+for example, you have a CD on hdb, and a second hard drive on hdc, partitions
+on that second hard drive would still be (hd1,b).</para>
 
 <para>So, using the information above, select the appropriate designator for
-your root partition.  For the purposes of this, we will assume hd(0,3) for
-your root partition.  First, we tell grub where to find it's files:</para>
+your root partition.  For the purposes of this, we will assume (hd0,3) for
+your root partition.  First, we tell grub where to find its files:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>root (hd0,3)
 setup (hd0)
 quit</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>This tells grub to look for it's files on hda4 (hd0,3), and install itself
+<para>This tells grub to look for its files on hda4 (hd0,3), and install itself
 into the MBR (Master Boot Record) of hda.</para>
 
 <para>Also, we need to create the <filename>menu.lst</filename> file, which
-Grub uses to designate it's boot menu:</para>
+Grub uses to designate its boot menu:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>cat &gt; /boot/grub/menu.lst &lt;&lt; "EOF"
 # Begin /boot/grub/menu.lst
@@ -42,7 +42,8 @@ color green/black light-green/black
 
 # Default Entry for LFS
 title LFS 5.0
-kernel (hd0,3)/boot/lfskernel root=/dev/hda4 ro
+root (hd0,3)
+kernel /boot/lfskernel root=/dev/hda4 ro
 EOF</userinput></screen></para>
 
 <para>You might also want to add in an entry for your host distribution.  It
@@ -51,8 +52,9 @@ might look similar to this:</para>
 <para><screen><userinput>cat &gt;&gt; /boot/grub/menu.lst &lt;&lt; "EOF"
 # Redhat Linux
 title Redhat
-kernel (hd0,2)/boot/kernel-2.4.20 root=/dev/hda3 ro
-initrd (hd0,2)/boot/initrd-2.4.20
+root (hd0,2)
+kernel /boot/kernel-2.4.20 root=/dev/hda3 ro
+initrd /boot/initrd-2.4.20
 EOF</userinput></screen></para>
 
 <para>Also, if you happen to dual-boot Windows, the following entry should
@@ -60,7 +62,9 @@ allow booting it:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>cat &gt;&gt; /boot/grub/menu.lst &lt;&lt; "EOF"
 # Windows
-chainloader (hd0,0)+1
+title Windows
+rootnoverify (hd0,0)
+chainloader +1
 EOF</userinput></screen></para>
 
 <para>You can find more info regarding Grub on it's web site, located at:

chapter08/introduction.xml

@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@
 
 <para>This chapter will make LFS bootable. This chapter deals with creating a
 new fstab file, building a
-new kernel for the new LFS system and adding the proper entries to LILO
-so that the LFS system can be selected for booting at the LILO: prompt.</para>
+new kernel for the new LFS system and installing the Grub bootloader
+so that the LFS system can be selected for booting at startup.</para>
 
 </sect1>
 

chapter09/reboot.xml

@@ -21,29 +21,11 @@ umount $LFS</userinput></screen></para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>/sbin/shutdown -r now</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>At the LILO: prompt make sure that you tell it to boot 
+<para>At the Grub menu make sure that you tell it to boot 
 <emphasis>lfs</emphasis> and not the default entry which will boot your
 host system again.</para>
 
 <para>After you have rebooted, your LFS system is ready for use and you
 can start adding your own software.</para>
 
-<para>One final thing you may want to do is run lilo, now that you are
-booted into LFS. This way you will put the LFS version of LILO in the MBR
-rather than the one that's there right now from your host system.
-Depending on how old your host distribution is, the LFS version may have
-more advanced features you need/could use.</para>
-
-<para>Either way, run the following to make the lilo version installed
-on LFS active:</para>
-
-<para><screen><userinput>/sbin/lilo</userinput></screen></para>
-
-<para>You may now remove the <filename>tools</filename> directory. If you
-think you may need to redo Chapter 5, then you may wish to backup the directory
-before removing it. To remove the <filename>tools</filename> directory, type
-the following command, carefully:</para>
-
-<para><screen><userinput>rm -rf /tools</userinput></screen></para>
-
 </sect1>