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Marc Heerdink 24 жил өмнө
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 <para>
 Part One gives general information about this book (versions, where
 to get it, changelog, mailing lists, and how to get in touch with us).
-It also explains a few important aspects a user really wants and needs to
+It also explains a few important aspects you really want and need to
 read before starting to build an LFS system.
 </para>
 

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 <title>Who would not want to read this book</title>
 
 <para>
-Users who don't want to build an entire Linux system from scratch
+People who don't want to build an entire Linux system from scratch
 probably don't want to read this book. If you, however, want to learn
 more about what happens behind the scenes, in particular what happens
 between turning on the computer and seeing the command prompt, you may 

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@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ custom built Linux system. Reasons for wanting to build such a system are
 diverse. Perhaps you want to get into more detail as to what
 happens behind the scenes. Perhaps you are fed up with distributions
 which are often bloated or perhaps you don't want to rely on pre-compiled
-binaries due to security concerns. There are many reasons why a user may 
+binaries due to security concerns. There are many reasons why someone may 
 want a custom built system. If you are one of them, this book is meant
 for you.
 </para>