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git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@11388 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
Bruce Dubbs 7 years ago
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4 changed files with 6 additions and 6 deletions
  1. 1 1
      chapter06/systemd.xml
  2. 1 1
      prologue/foreword.xml
  3. 3 3
      prologue/standards.xml
  4. 1 1
      prologue/why.xml

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chapter06/systemd.xml

@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
 
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i '527,565 d'                  src/basic/missing.h
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i '527,565 d'                  src/basic/missing.h
 sed -i '24 d'                       src/core/load-fragment.c
 sed -i '24 d'                       src/core/load-fragment.c
-sed -i '53 a#include &lt;sys/mount.h&gt;' src/shared/bus-unit-util.cd</userinput></screen>
+sed -i '53 a#include &lt;sys/mount.h&gt;' src/shared/bus-unit-util.c</userinput></screen>
 
 
     <para>Remove an unneeded group,
     <para>Remove an unneeded group,
     <systemitem class="groupname">render</systemitem>, from the default udev
     <systemitem class="groupname">render</systemitem>, from the default udev

+ 1 - 1
prologue/foreword.xml

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
 
 
   <title>Foreword</title>
   <title>Foreword</title>
 
 
-<para>My journey to learn and better understand Linux began over a decade ago,
+<para>My journey to learn and better understand Linux began 
 back in 1998. I had just installed my first Linux distribution and had
 back in 1998. I had just installed my first Linux distribution and had
 quickly become intrigued with the whole concept and philosophy behind
 quickly become intrigued with the whole concept and philosophy behind
 Linux.</para>
 Linux.</para>

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prologue/standards.xml

@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
       </listitem>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para><ulink url="http://refspecs.linuxfoundation.org/lsb.shtml">Linux
         <para><ulink url="http://refspecs.linuxfoundation.org/lsb.shtml">Linux
-        Standard Base (LSB) Version 5.0</ulink></para>
+        Standard Base (LSB) Version 5.0 (2015)</ulink></para>
 
 
         <para>The LSB has four separate standards: Core, Desktop,
         <para>The LSB has four separate standards: Core, Desktop,
         Runtime Languages, and Imaging. In addition to generic requirements
         Runtime Languages, and Imaging. In addition to generic requirements
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@
         <listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>Alsa, ATK, Cairo, Desktop-file-utils, Freetype, Fontconfig,
           <para>Alsa, ATK, Cairo, Desktop-file-utils, Freetype, Fontconfig,
           Gdk-pixbuf, Glib2, GTK+2, Icon-naming-utils, Libjpeg-turbo, Libpng, Libtiff,
           Gdk-pixbuf, Glib2, GTK+2, Icon-naming-utils, Libjpeg-turbo, Libpng, Libtiff,
-          Libxml2, MesaLib, Pango, Qt4, Xdg-utils, Xorg</para>
+          Libxml2, MesaLib, Pango, Xdg-utils, Xorg</para>
         </listitem>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
       </varlistentry>
 
 
@@ -160,7 +160,7 @@
       <varlistentry>
       <varlistentry>
         <term><emphasis>LSB Desktop:</emphasis></term>
         <term><emphasis>LSB Desktop:</emphasis></term>
         <listitem>
         <listitem>
-          <para>None</para>
+          <para>Qt4 (but Qt5 is provided)</para>
         </listitem>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
       </varlistentry>
 
 

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prologue/why.xml

@@ -524,7 +524,7 @@
       <listitem revision="systemd">
       <listitem revision="systemd">
         <para>Systemd</para>
         <para>Systemd</para>
 
 
-        <para>This package provides and <application>init</application> program
+        <para>This package provides an <application>init</application> program
         and several additional boot and system control capabilities as an
         and several additional boot and system control capabilities as an
         alternative to Sysvinit.  It is used by many commercial distributions.
         alternative to Sysvinit.  It is used by many commercial distributions.
         </para>
         </para>