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Reworded errata page.

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      prologue/errata.xml

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chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -91,6 +91,9 @@ First a summary, then a detailed log.</para>
 </itemizedlist>
 </listitem>
 
+<listitem><para>July  4th, 2005 [archaic]: Reworded errata page so it only
+refers to security warnings and bug fixes, not new features.</para></listitem>
+
 <listitem><para>July  4th, 2005 [archaic]: Brought (hopefully) all references of
 man/info pages into conformity. Man page conformity was based on if referring to
 a specific man page or man pages in general. Updated typography to reflect

+ 6 - 6
prologue/errata.xml

@@ -8,12 +8,12 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="errata.html"?>
 
 <para>The software used to create an LFS system is constantly being updated and
-enhanced. New features, security warnings, and bug fixes may become available
-after the LFS book has been released. To check whether the package versions or
-instructions in this release of LFS need any modifications to accomodate
-security or bug fixes, please visit <ulink url="&errata;"/> before proceeding
-with your build. You should note any changes shown and apply them to the
-relevant section of the book as you progress with building the LFS system.
+enhanced. Security warnings, and bug fixes may become available after the LFS
+book has been released. To check whether the package versions or instructions in
+this release of LFS need any modifications to accomodate security
+vulnerabilities or other bug fixes, please visit <ulink url="&errata;"/> before
+proceeding with your build. You should note any changes shown and apply them to
+the relevant section of the book as you progress with building the LFS system.
 </para>
 
 </sect1>