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operational and perfectly usable like any of the other Linux systems out
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there at the time. But it was my own creation. It was very satisfying to
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have put together such a system yourself. The only thing better would have
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-been to create each piece of software yourself. This was the next best
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+been to create each piece of software myself. This was the next best
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thing.</para>
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<para>As I shared my goals and experiences with other members of the Linux
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@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ enhance their (existing) Linux skills. Out of this broadened interest, the
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provides the background and instructions necessary for you to design and
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build your own system. While this book provides a template that will result
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in a correctly working system, you are free to alter the instructions to
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-suit yourself . that is the whole point of the project after all. You
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+suit yourself, which is in part the whole point of this project after all. You
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remain in control; we just lend a helping hand to get you started on your
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own journey.</para>
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