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Minor wording improvements

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@5316 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
Matthew Burgess 20 gadi atpakaļ
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      chapter01/changelog.xml
  2. 2 2
      general.ent
  3. 2 2
      prologue/audience.xml
  4. 1 1
      prologue/prerequisites.xml

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chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -84,6 +84,9 @@ first a summary, then a detailed log.</para>
 </itemizedlist>
 </listitem>
 
+<listitem><para>May 12th, 2005 [matt]: Minor wording improvements (thanks to
+Peter Ennis)</para></listitem>
+
 <listitem><para>April 27th, 2005 [archaic]: Added a patch to fix 2 glibc
 testsuite failures when the running kernel is 2.6.11.x.</para></listitem>
 

+ 2 - 2
general.ent

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
-<!ENTITY version "SVN-20050428">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "April 28, 2005">
+<!ENTITY version "SVN-20050512">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "May 12, 2005">
 <!ENTITY milestone "6.2">
 
 <!ENTITY lfs-root "http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/">

+ 2 - 2
prologue/audience.xml

@@ -31,10 +31,10 @@ and how programs are installed.</para>
 
 <para>Another benefit of LFS is the ability to create a very compact
 Linux system. When installing a regular distribution, one is often
-forced to install several programs which are probably never used.
+forced to include several programs which are probably never used.
 These programs waste precious disk space, or worse, CPU cycles. It is
 not difficult to build an LFS system of less than 100 megabytes (MB),
-which is substantially smaller compared to most existing setups.  Does
+which is substantially smaller when compared to the majority of existing installations.  Does
 this still sound like a lot of space? A few of us have been working on
 creating a very small embedded LFS system. We successfully built a
 system that was specialized to run the Apache web server with

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prologue/prerequisites.xml

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ recommend reading the following HOWTOs:</para>
 <quote>generic</quote> Unix software distributions under Linux.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>The Linux Users' Guide
-<ulink url="http://espc22.murdoch.edu.au/~stewart/guide/guide.html"/></para>
+<ulink url="http://www.linuxhq.com/guides/LUG/guide.html"/></para>
 
 <para>This guide covers the usage of assorted Linux software.</para></listitem>