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<title>Introduction</title>
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<para>
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-Below is a list of all the packages you need to download for building
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+Below is a list of all the packages that are needed to download for building
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the basic system. The version numbers printed correspond to versions of
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-the software that is known to work and which this book is based on. If you
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-experience problems which you can't solve yourself, download the version that
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-is assumed in this book (in case you downloaded a newer version).
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+the software that is known to work and which this book is based on.
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+If the user
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+experiences problems which he can't solve himself, he should download the
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+version that
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+is assumed in this book (in case he downloaded a newer version).
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</para>
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<para>
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We have provided a list of official download sites of the packages below
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in <ulink url="appendixc.html">Appendix C - Official download locations
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</ulink>. The LFS FTP archive only contains the versions of packages
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-that are recommended for use in this book. If you're looking
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-for newer versions than the ones listed here you can have a look in
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-Appendix C.
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+that are recommended for use in this book. Newer versions than the ones
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+listed here might be found after having a look in Appendix C.
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</para>
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<para>
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Please note that all files downloaded from the LFS FTP archive are files
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-compressed with bzip2 instead of gz. If you don't know how to handle bz2
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-files, please read <ulink url="ch02-install.html">Chapter 2 - How to install
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+compressed with bzip2 instead of gz. If the user does not know how to
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+handle bz2
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+files, he should read <ulink url="ch02-install.html">Chapter 2 - How to install
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the software</ulink>.
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</para>
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Thomas Balu Walter