Grammar fixes.

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chapter02/download.xml

@@ -2,17 +2,17 @@
 <title>How to download the software</title>
 
 <para>
-Throughout this document I will assume that all the
+Throughout this document, I will assume that all the
 packages that were downloaded are placed somewhere in $LFS/usr/src.
 </para>
 
 <para>
 I use the convention of having a $LFS/usr/src/sources directory.
-Under sources I have the directory 0-9 and the directories a
+Under sources, I have the directory 0-9 and the directories a
 through z. A package as sysvinit-2.78.tar.gz is stored under
-$LFS/usr/src/sources/s/ A package as bash-2.04.tar.gz is stored under 
-$LFS/usr/src/sources/b/ and so forth. This convention does not have to be
-followed of course, I was just giving an example. It's better to keep 
+$LFS/usr/src/sources/s/. A package as bash-2.04.tar.gz is stored under 
+$LFS/usr/src/sources/b/, and so forth. This convention does not have to be
+followed, of course; I was just giving an example. It's better to keep 
 the packages out of $LFS/usr/src and move them to a subdirectory, so 
 we'll have a clean $LFS/usr/src directory in which we will unpack the 
 packages and work with them.
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ downloaded,
 but the partition that is going to contain our LFS system isn't created yet.
 Therefore, the files are temporarily stored somewhere else and later 
 copied to $LFS/usr/src/ when the chapter in which 
-the new partition is prepared got finished.
+the new partition is prepared has been finished.
 </para>
 
 </sect1>