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appendixa/bison-desc.xml

@@ -34,8 +34,8 @@ Given the string :
 </literallayout></blockquote>
 
 <para>
-You can easily come to the result 7. Why ? Because of the structure. You
-know
+A human can easily come to the result 7. Why? Because of the structure. 
+Our brain knows
 how to interpretet the string. The computer doesn't know that and Bison
 is a
 tool to help it understand by presenting the string in the following way

chapter06/shadowpwd-exp.xml

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 <userinput>cp limits login.access and others:</userinput> These files
 were not installed during the installation of the package so we copy
 them manually as those files are used to configure authentication
-details on your system.
+details on the system.
 </para>
 
 </sect2>

chapter07/usage.xml

@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ services get killed and others get started.
 
 <para>
 The real scripts are in /etc/init.d. They do all the work, and the
-symlinks all point to them. You'll note that killing links and starting 
+symlinks all point to them. Killing links and starting 
 links point to the same script in /etc/init.d. That's because the scripts 
 can be called with different parameters like start, stop, restart, reload, 
 status. When a K link is encountered, the appropriate script is run with