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More Systemd -> systemd renaming, fix ordering and wording in chapter07 introduction, removed final leftovers from network scripts.

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共有 8 個文件被更改,包括 13 次插入16 次删除
  1. 0 3
      chapter01/whatsnew.xml
  2. 1 1
      chapter07/clock.xml
  3. 1 1
      chapter07/console.xml
  4. 5 5
      chapter07/introduction.xml
  5. 2 2
      chapter07/locale.xml
  6. 1 1
      chapter07/udev.xml
  7. 1 1
      chapter08/kernel.xml
  8. 2 2
      chapter09/theend.xml

+ 0 - 3
chapter01/whatsnew.xml

@@ -135,9 +135,6 @@
     <!--<listitem>
       <para>Less &less-version;</para>
     </listitem>-->
-    <!--<listitem>
-      <para>LFS-Network-Scripts &lfs-network-scripts-version;</para>
-    </listitem>-->
     <!--<listitem>
       <para>Libcap-&libcap-version;</para>
     </listitem>-->

+ 1 - 1
chapter07/clock.xml

@@ -70,6 +70,6 @@ EOF</userinput></screen>
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>timedatectl list-timezones</userinput></screen>
 
   <note><para>Please note that <command>timedatectl</command> command can
-  be used only on a system booted with Systemd.</para></note>
+  be used only on a system booted with systemd.</para></note>
 
 </sect1>

+ 1 - 1
chapter07/console.xml

@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ EOF</userinput></screen>
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>localectl set-keymap MAP</userinput></screen>
 
   <note><para>Please note that <command>localectl</command> command can
-  be used  only on a system booted with Systemd.</para></note>
+  be used  only on a system booted with systemd.</para></note>
 
   <para>You can also use <command>localectl</command> utility with the
   corresponding parameters to change X11 keyboard layout, model, variant

+ 5 - 5
chapter07/introduction.xml

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
 
   <title>Introduction</title>
 
-  <para>This chapter discusses configuration files and boot scripts.
+  <para>This chapter discusses configuration files and systemd services.
   First, the general configuration files needed to set up networking are
   presented.</para>
 
@@ -18,6 +18,9 @@
      <listitem>
        <para><xref linkend="ch-scripts-network" role="."/></para>
      </listitem>
+     <listitem>
+       <para><xref linkend="ch-scripts-hostname" role="."/></para>
+     </listitem>
      <listitem>
        <para><xref linkend="ch-scripts-hosts" role="."/></para>
      </listitem>
@@ -35,12 +38,9 @@
      </listitem>
   </itemizedlist>
 
-  <para>Third, configuring the hostname, system clock, and keyboard layout.</para>
+  <para>Third, configuring the system clock and keyboard layout.</para>
 
   <itemizedlist>
-     <listitem>
-       <para><xref linkend="ch-scripts-hostname" role="."/></para>
-     </listitem>
      <listitem>
        <para><xref linkend="ch-scripts-clock" role="."/></para>
      </listitem>

+ 2 - 2
chapter07/locale.xml

@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ LC_ALL=&lt;locale name&gt; locale int_prefix</userinput></screen>
 EOF</userinput></screen>
 
   <para>Note that you can modify <filename>/etc/locale.conf</filename> with
-  Systemd <command>localectl</command> utility. To use <command>localectl</command>
+  systemd <command>localectl</command> utility. To use <command>localectl</command>
   for the example above, run:</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>localectl set-locale LANG="<replaceable>&lt;ll&gt;_&lt;CC&gt;.&lt;charmap&gt;&lt;@modifiers&gt;</replaceable>"</userinput></screen>
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ EOF</userinput></screen>
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>localectl set-locale LANG="en_US.UTF-8" LC_CTYPE="en_US"</userinput></screen>
 
   <note><para>Please note that <command>localectl</command> command can
-  be used  only on a system booted with Systemd.</para></note>
+  be used  only on a system booted with systemd.</para></note>
 
   <para>The <quote>C</quote> (default) and <quote>en_US</quote> (the recommended
   one for United States English users) locales are different. <quote>C</quote>

+ 1 - 1
chapter07/udev.xml

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
   </indexterm>
 
   <para>In <xref linkend="chapter-building-system"/>, we installed Udev
-  from the Systemd source package. Before we go into the details regarding
+  from the systemd source package. Before we go into the details regarding
   how this works, a brief history of previous methods of handling devices
   is in order.</para>
 

+ 1 - 1
chapter08/kernel.xml

@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ File systems  ---&gt;
     [*] Tmpfs extended attributes</screen></note>
 
     <note><para>While "The IPv6 Protocol" is not strictly required, it is
-    highly recommended by the Systemd developers.</para></note>
+    highly recommended by the systemd developers.</para></note>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>make LANG=<replaceable>&lt;host_LANG_value&gt;</replaceable> LC_ALL= menuconfig</userinput></screen>
 

+ 2 - 2
chapter09/theend.xml

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
   success with your shiny new custom-built Linux system.</para>
 
   <para>Create an <filename>/etc/os-release</filename> file required by
-  Systemd:</para>
+  systemd:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>cat &gt; /etc/os-release &lt;&lt; "EOF"
 NAME="Linux From Scratch"
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ PRETTY_NAME="Linux From Scratch &version;"
 EOF</userinput></screen>
 
   <para>It is recommended to create <filename>/etc/lfs-release</filename>
-  for compatibility with non Systemd branch. By having this file, it is very
+  for compatibility with non systemd branch. By having this file, it is very
   easy for you (and for us if you need to ask for help at some point) to find
   out which LFS version is installed on the system. Create this file by
   running:</para>