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chapter05/pwdgroup.xml

@@ -2,14 +2,14 @@
 <title>Creating passwd and group files</title>
 
 <para>
-In order for user and group root to be recognized and to be able to login, 
-it needs an entry in the /etc/passwd and /etc/group file. Besides the
+In order for the user and group root to be recognized and to be able to login, 
+there needs to be an entry in the /etc/passwd and /etc/group file. Besides the
 group root a couple of other groups are recommended and needed by
 packages. The groups with their GID's below aren't part of any standard.
 The LSB only recommends besides a group root a group bin to be present
 with GID 1. Other group names and GID's can be chosen by the user. Well
 written packages don't depend on GID numbers but just use the group
-name, it doesn't matter all that much what GID a group has. Since there
+name, since it doesn't matter all that much what GID a group has. Since there
 aren't any standards for groups I won't follow any conventions used by
 Debian, RedHat and others. The groups added here are the groups the
 MAKEDEV script (the script that creates the device files in the /dev

chapter06/introduction.xml

@@ -3,12 +3,13 @@
 
 <para>
 The installation of all the software is pretty straightforward and
-a user will think it's so much easier and shorter to give the generic 
+you will probably think it's so much easier and shorter to give the generic 
 installation instructions for each package and only explain how to 
 install something if a certain package requires an alternate installation 
-method. Although I agree on that, I, however, choose to give the 
+method. Although I agree on that, I choose to give the 
 full instructions for each and every package. This is simply to avoid any 
 possible confusion and errors.
 </para>
 
 </sect1>
+