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Fixed 2 small typos in shadow and coreutils (chap6).

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@5715 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
Archaic 20 лет назад
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3 измененных файлов с 6 добавлено и 8 удалено
  1. 3 5
      chapter06/coreutils.xml
  2. 1 1
      chapter06/shadow.xml
  3. 2 2
      general.ent

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chapter06/coreutils.xml

@@ -135,9 +135,7 @@ users, vdir, wc, who, whoami, and yes</seg></seglistitem>
 <varlistentry id="chgrp">
 <term><command>chgrp</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>Changes the group ownership of each given file to the given
-group; the group can either be either given a name or a numeric
-ID</para>
+<para>Changes the group ownership of files/directories to the given group</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-coreutils chgrp"><primary sortas="b-chgrp">chgrp</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -155,8 +153,8 @@ octal number representing the new permissions</para>
 <varlistentry id="chown">
 <term><command>chown</command></term>
 <listitem>
-<para>Changes the user and/or group ownership of
-each given file to the given user/group pair</para>
+<para>Changes the user and/or group ownership of files/directories to the given
+user/group</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-coreutils chown"><primary sortas="b-chown">chown</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>

+ 1 - 1
chapter06/shadow.xml

@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ Diffutils, GCC, Gettext, Glibc, Grep, Make, and Sed</seg></seglistitem>
 <para>Shadow fails to update the time of last login as noted by 
 <command>lastlog</command> when logging into a regular console. 
 The Port (tty) column does get updated. Remote logins and 
-<command>xterm</command> logins seem to be not be broken, just console.
+<command>xterm</command> logins seem to not be broken; just console.
 The following patch properly fixes this issue:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../shadow-&shadow-version;-fix_lastlog-1.patch</userinput></screen>

+ 2 - 2
general.ent

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
-<!ENTITY version "SVN-20050524">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "May 24, 2005">
+<!ENTITY version "SVN-20050605">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "June 05, 2005">
 <!ENTITY milestone "6.2">
 
 <!ENTITY lfs-root "http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/">