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Named the hint authors, updated the URL to the editors in the hints index, and mentioned the Gawk patch to avoid confusion.

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Timothy Bauscher 23 years ago
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chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -6,6 +6,22 @@
 
 
 <itemizedlist>
 <itemizedlist>
 
 
+<listitem><para>June 5th, 2002 [timothy] Chapter 09 - Rebooting
+the system: named the hint author.</para></listitem>
+
+<listitem><para>June 5th, 2002 [timothy] Chapter 06 - Vim:
+updated the hint URL.</para></listitem>
+
+<listitem><para>June 5th, 2002 [timothy] Chapter 06 - LILO:
+named the hint authors.</para></listitem>
+
+<listitem><para>June 5th, 2002 [timothy] Chapter 06 - Bootscripts:
+named the hint author.</para></listitem>
+
+<listitem><para>June 5th, 2002 [timothy] Chapter 05 - Gawk:
+mentioned that the patch will be applied in Chapter 06. The
+patch caused some confusion.</para></listitem>
+
 <listitem><para>June 3rd, 2002 [timothy] Chapter 01 - FAQ: edited
 <listitem><para>June 3rd, 2002 [timothy] Chapter 01 - FAQ: edited
 to include reporting typos.</para></listitem>
 to include reporting typos.</para></listitem>
 
 

+ 2 - 1
chapter05/gawk-inst.xml

@@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
 <sect2>
 <sect2>
 <title>Installation of Gawk</title>
 <title>Installation of Gawk</title>
 
 
-<para>Install Gawk by running the following commands:</para>
+<para>We will apply a patch to Gawk in Chapter 6. Install Gawk by
+running the following commands:</para>
 
 
 <para><screen><userinput>CPPFLAGS=-Dre_max_failures=re_max_failures2 \
 <para><screen><userinput>CPPFLAGS=-Dre_max_failures=re_max_failures2 \
 ./configure --prefix=$LFS/static --disable-nls &amp;&amp;
 ./configure --prefix=$LFS/static --disable-nls &amp;&amp;

+ 4 - 3
chapter06/bootscripts-inst.xml

@@ -2,9 +2,10 @@
 <title>Installation of LFS-Bootscripts</title>
 <title>Installation of LFS-Bootscripts</title>
 
 
 <para>We will be using SysV style init scripts. We have chosen this style
 <para>We will be using SysV style init scripts. We have chosen this style
-because it is widely used and we feel comfortable with it. If you want to
-try something else, someone has written an LFS-Hint on BSD style init
-scripts at <ulink url="&hints-root;bsd-init.txt"/>.</para>
+because it is widely used and we feel comfortable with it. If you would
+prefer to try something else, Marc Heerdink has written a hint about BSD
+style init scripts, which may be found at
+<ulink url="&hints-root;bsd-init.txt"/>.</para>
 
 
 <para>If you decide to use BSD style, or some other style scripts, you can
 <para>If you decide to use BSD style, or some other style scripts, you can
 skip chapter 7 when you arrive at it and move on to chapter 8.</para>
 skip chapter 7 when you arrive at it and move on to chapter 8.</para>

+ 6 - 6
chapter06/lilo-inst.xml

@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 <title>Installation of Lilo</title>
 <title>Installation of Lilo</title>
 
 
 <para>We have chosen Lilo as a boot loader because we feel comfortable with it, but you 
 <para>We have chosen Lilo as a boot loader because we feel comfortable with it, but you 
-may wish to choose another. Someone has written a hint on 
-GRUB at <ulink url="&hints-root;grub-howto.txt"/>.</para>
+may wish to choose another. Fabio Fracassi has written a hint on 
+GRUB, which is available at <ulink url="&hints-root;grub-howto.txt"/>.</para>
 
 
 <para>Install Lilo by running the following commands:</para>
 <para>Install Lilo by running the following commands:</para>
 
 
@@ -20,9 +20,9 @@ message stating that /sbin/lilo has to be executed to complete the
 update. Don't do this, as it has no use: the /etc/lilo.conf isn't present
 update. Don't do this, as it has no use: the /etc/lilo.conf isn't present
 yet. We will complete the installation of lilo in chapter 8.</para>
 yet. We will complete the installation of lilo in chapter 8.</para>
 
 
-<para>Maybe you'll be interested to know that someone wrote a hint on 
-how to get a logo instead of the standard LILO prompt or menu. Take 
-a look at it at <ulink url="&hints-root;bootlogo.txt"/>.</para>
+<para>The standard LILO prompt, or menu, may be replaced by the
+LFS logo, or any logo you like. Martin Imobersteg has written a
+hint about this, which is located at 
+<ulink url="&hints-root;bootlogo.txt"/>.</para>
 
 
 </sect2>
 </sect2>
-

+ 2 - 2
chapter06/vim-inst.xml

@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ commands.</para>
 <para>If you don't like vim to be installed as an editor on your LFS system,
 <para>If you don't like vim to be installed as an editor on your LFS system,
 you may want to download an alternative and install the editor you 
 you may want to download an alternative and install the editor you 
 prefer. There are a few hints on how to install different editors
 prefer. There are a few hints on how to install different editors
-available at <ulink url="&hints-root;"/>.  Currently there are hints 
-for Emacs, joe, and nano.</para>
+available at <ulink url="http://hints.linuxfromscratch.org/hints.shtml#editors"/>. 
+Currently there are hints for Emacs, joe, and nano.</para>
 
 
 <para>Install Vim by running the following commands:</para>
 <para>Install Vim by running the following commands:</para>
 
 

+ 2 - 2
chapter09/reboot.xml

@@ -39,8 +39,8 @@ on LFS active:</para>
  
  
 <para><screen><userinput>/sbin/lilo</userinput></screen></para>
 <para><screen><userinput>/sbin/lilo</userinput></screen></para>
  
  
-<para>If you are wondering: "Well, where to go now?" you'll be glad to
-hear that someone has written an LFS hint on the subject at <ulink
+<para>If you are wondering "what do i do now?", then you will be glad to
+know that Max Schattauer has written a hint on this subject at <ulink
 url="&hints-root;afterlfs.txt"/>.  On a similar note, if you are not 
 url="&hints-root;afterlfs.txt"/>.  On a similar note, if you are not 
 only a newbie to LFS, but also to Linux in general, you may 
 only a newbie to LFS, but also to Linux in general, you may 
 find the newbie hint at <ulink url="&hints-root;newbie.txt"/> very 
 find the newbie hint at <ulink url="&hints-root;newbie.txt"/> very 

+ 2 - 2
index.xml

@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@
 
 
 <!ENTITY book SYSTEM "book/book.xml">
 <!ENTITY book SYSTEM "book/book.xml">
 
 
-<!ENTITY version "20020604">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "June 4th, 2002">
+<!ENTITY version "20020605">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "June 5th, 2002">
 
 
 <!ENTITY ftp-root "ftp://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org">
 <!ENTITY ftp-root "ftp://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org">
 <!ENTITY http-root "http://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org">
 <!ENTITY http-root "http://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org">