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Fixed top description. Ported from trunk r6064.

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/6.1/BOOK@6066 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
Manuel Canales Esparcia 20 年之前
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共有 2 個文件被更改,包括 5 次插入4 次删除
  1. 2 1
      chapter01/changelog.xml
  2. 3 3
      chapter06/procps.xml

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chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -87,7 +87,8 @@ First a summary, then a detailed log.</para>
 <listitem><para>June 20th, 2005 [manuel]: Added a warning about kernel
 <listitem><para>June 20th, 2005 [manuel]: Added a warning about kernel
 headers and Linux-Libc-Headers, plus fixed the list of installed files
 headers and Linux-Libc-Headers, plus fixed the list of installed files
 on kernel.xml (bug 1569). Some typos and tags fixes ported from trunk
 on kernel.xml (bug 1569). Some typos and tags fixes ported from trunk
-(r6048 to r6050 and r6053 to r6056)</para></listitem>
+(r6048 to r6050 and r6053 to r6056.) Fixed top program description
+(bug 1549.)</para></listitem>
 
 
 <listitem><para>June 19th, 2005 [jhuntwork]: Changed listing of IRC servers to show
 <listitem><para>June 19th, 2005 [jhuntwork]: Changed listing of IRC servers to show
 only irc.linuxfromscratch.org.</para></listitem>
 only irc.linuxfromscratch.org.</para></listitem>

+ 3 - 3
chapter06/procps.xml

@@ -137,8 +137,8 @@ swap memory) in the system</para>
 <varlistentry id="top">
 <varlistentry id="top">
 <term><command>top</command></term>
 <term><command>top</command></term>
 <listitem>
 <listitem>
-<para>Displays the top CPU processes; it provides an ongoing look at
-processor activity in real time</para>
+<para>Displays a list of the most CPU intensive processes; it provides an
+ongoing look at processor activity in real time</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-procps top"><primary sortas="b-top">top</primary></indexterm>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-procps top"><primary sortas="b-top">top</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 </varlistentry>
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ processes, memory, paging, block Input/Output (IO), traps, and CPU activity</par
 <varlistentry id="watch">
 <varlistentry id="watch">
 <term><command>watch</command></term>
 <term><command>watch</command></term>
 <listitem>
 <listitem>
-<para>Runs a given command repeatedly, displaying the first screen-full of its 
+<para>Runs a given command repeatedly, displaying the first screen-full of its
 output; this allows a user to watch the output change over time</para>
 output; this allows a user to watch the output change over time</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-procps watch"><primary sortas="b-watch">watch</primary></indexterm>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-procps watch"><primary sortas="b-watch">watch</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
 </listitem>