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More minor wording tweaks (matt).

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  1. 3 3
      chapter01/changelog.xml
  2. 1 1
      chapter03/introduction.xml
  3. 1 1
      chapter05/gettext.xml
  4. 2 2
      chapter05/grep.xml
  5. 2 2
      chapter05/ncurses.xml

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chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="changelog.html"?>
 <?dbhtml filename="changelog.html"?>
 
 
 <para>This is version &version; of the Linux From Scratch book, dated
 <para>This is version &version; of the Linux From Scratch book, dated
-&releasedate;. If this book is more than four to six months old, a newer and
-better version is probably already available. To find out, please check one of
-the mirrors via <ulink url="&lfs-root;"/>.</para>
+&releasedate;. If this book is more than six months old, a newer and better
+version is probably already available. To find out, please check one of the
+mirrors via <ulink url="&lfs-root;"/>.</para>
 
 
 <para>Below is a list of changes made since the previous release of the book.
 <para>Below is a list of changes made since the previous release of the book.
 First a summary, then a detailed log.</para>
 First a summary, then a detailed log.</para>

+ 1 - 1
chapter03/introduction.xml

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ of the software that are known to work, and this book is based on their use. We
 highly recommend not using newer versions because the build commands for one
 highly recommend not using newer versions because the build commands for one
 version may not work with a newer version. The newest package versions may also
 version may not work with a newer version. The newest package versions may also
 have problems that require work-arounds. These work-arounds will be developed
 have problems that require work-arounds. These work-arounds will be developed
-and stabilized in the SVN version of the book.</para>
+and stabilized in the development version of the book.</para>
 
 
 <para>Download locations may not always be accessible. If a download
 <para>Download locations may not always be accessible. If a download
 location has changed since this book was published, Google (<ulink
 location has changed since this book was published, Google (<ulink

+ 1 - 1
chapter05/gettext.xml

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ exclude it to save time and space.</para></listitem>
 <term><parameter>--without-csharp</parameter></term>
 <term><parameter>--without-csharp</parameter></term>
 <listitem><para>This ensures that Gettext does not build support for the C#
 <listitem><para>This ensures that Gettext does not build support for the C#
 compiler which may be present on the host but will not be available once we
 compiler which may be present on the host but will not be available once we
-enter the chroot environment.</para></listitem>
+enter the <command>chroot</command> environment.</para></listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 </varlistentry>
 </variablelist>
 </variablelist>
 
 

+ 2 - 2
chapter05/grep.xml

@@ -41,8 +41,8 @@
 <term><parameter>--disable-perl-regexp</parameter></term>
 <term><parameter>--disable-perl-regexp</parameter></term>
 <listitem><para>This ensures that the <command>grep</command> program does not
 <listitem><para>This ensures that the <command>grep</command> program does not
 get linked against a Perl Compatible Regular Expression (PCRE) library that may
 get linked against a Perl Compatible Regular Expression (PCRE) library that may
-be present on the host but will not be available once we enter the chroot
-environment.</para></listitem>
+be present on the host but will not be available once we enter the
+<command>chroot</command> environment.</para></listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 </varlistentry>
 </variablelist>
 </variablelist>
 
 

+ 2 - 2
chapter05/ncurses.xml

@@ -39,9 +39,9 @@
 <variablelist>
 <variablelist>
 <varlistentry>
 <varlistentry>
 <term><parameter>--without-ada</parameter></term>
 <term><parameter>--without-ada</parameter></term>
-<listitem><para>This ensures that Ncurses does not build support for the ada
+<listitem><para>This ensures that Ncurses does not build support for the Ada
 compiler which may be present on the host but will not be available once we
 compiler which may be present on the host but will not be available once we
-enter the chroot environment.</para></listitem>
+enter the <command>chroot</command> environment.</para></listitem>
 </varlistentry>
 </varlistentry>
 
 
 <varlistentry>
 <varlistentry>