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Simon Perreault 24 years ago
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 Before we can build our new Linux system, we need to have an empty Linux
 Before we can build our new Linux system, we need to have an empty Linux
 partition on which we can build our new system. I recommend a partition size
 partition on which we can build our new system. I recommend a partition size
 of around 750 MB. This gives enough space to store all the tarballs and 
 of around 750 MB. This gives enough space to store all the tarballs and 
-to compile all packages without worrying running out of the necessary 
+to compile all packages without worrying about running out of the necessary 
 temporary disk space. If a Linux Native partition is already available, 
 temporary disk space. If a Linux Native partition is already available, 
 this subsection can be skipped.
 this subsection can be skipped.
 </para>
 </para>
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 <para>
 <para>
 The cfdisk program (or another fdisk like program the user prefers) is
 The cfdisk program (or another fdisk like program the user prefers) is
 started with the
 started with the
-appropriate hard disk as the option (like /dev/hda if he wants to create a
-new partition on the primary master IDE disk). He creates a Linux Native
-partition, writes the partition table and exits the cfdisk program. 
+appropriate hard disk as the option (like /dev/hda if the gentle reader
+wants to create a
+new partition on the primary master IDE disk). It is used to create a Linux
+Native partition, write the partition table and exit the cfdisk program. 
 The new partition's designation should be remembered. It could be something
 The new partition's designation should be remembered. It could be something
 like hda11 (as it is in my case). This newly created partition will be
 like hda11 (as it is in my case). This newly created partition will be
 referred to as the LFS partition in this book.
 referred to as the LFS partition in this book.