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chapter03/creatingfs.xml

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 Once the partition is created, we have to create a new file system on
 that partition. To create an ext2 file system, the mke2fs command is the
 correct choice. To create a reiser file system, the mkreiserfs command
-should be used. To create a different kind of file system, the
-appropriate command needs to be executed. The new partition is used
-as the only option to the
-command and the file system is created. If the partition is hda2
+should be used. The new partition is used as the only option to the
+command and the file system is created. If the partition is hda11
 and ext2 is to be created, the user would run:
 </para>
 
 <blockquote><literallayout>
 
-	<userinput>mke2fs /dev/hda2</userinput>
+	<userinput>mke2fs /dev/hda11</userinput>
 
 </literallayout></blockquote>
 
 <para>
-To use reiserfs the user would run:
+To create a reiser file system the user would run:
 </para>
 
 <blockquote><literallayout>
 
-	<userinput>mkreiserfs /dev/hda2</userinput>
+	<userinput>mkreiserfs /dev/hda11</userinput>
 
 </literallayout></blockquote>
 

chapter03/creatingpart.xml

@@ -4,22 +4,22 @@
 <para>
 Before we can build our new Linux system, we need to have an empty Linux
 partition on which we can build our new system. I recommend a partition size
-of around 750 MB. This gives enough space to store all the tarballs and 
+of at least 750 MB. This gives enough space to store all the tarballs and 
 to compile all packages without worrying about running out of the necessary 
-temporary disk space. If a Linux Native partition is already available, 
-this subsection can be skipped.
+temporary disk space. But you probably want more space than that if you
+plan to use the LFS system as your primary Linux system. If that's the
+case you'd want more space so you can install additional software. If a 
+Linux Native partition is already available, this subsection can be skipped.
 </para>
 
 <para>
 The cfdisk program (or another fdisk like program the user prefers) is
-started with the
-appropriate hard disk as the option (like /dev/hda if the gentle reader
-wants to create a
-new partition on the primary master IDE disk). It is used to create a Linux
-Native partition, write the partition table and exit the cfdisk program. 
-The new partition's designation should be remembered. It could be something
-like hda11 (as it is in my case). This newly created partition will be
-referred to as the LFS partition in this book.
+started with the appropriate hard disk as the option (like /dev/hda if a
+new partition is to be created on the primary master IDE disk). It is used 
+to create a Linux Native partition, write the partition table and exit the 
+cfdisk program. The new partition's designation should be remembered. It 
+could be something like hda11 (as it is in my case). This newly created 
+partition will be referred to as the LFS partition in this book.
 </para>
 
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